Hey mamas | MCYT 2

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So I try not to do author notes unless it's really important, and I feel like this is important

So for those of you who don't know, I do have a TikTok account called awstenwastaken.

This is a little bit of a self promo, but not the entire point, The entire point is I've been making edits using clips from SADist's animations. And if you don't know who that is, I highly recommend checking out their stuff it's amazing and it goes perfectly with the smp. They basically bring certain events to life.

Anyway, while making these edits I have gotten an idea to make a villain arc of Tommy. Where he would be a villain, it's very hard to explain but it's one of those things where you'd have to trust the process.

But the question at hand is, should I make that into a story where you could read it on Wattpad? Instead of a series of edits or a story on TikTok, should I make it a book that you could read?

Would that be interesting to you guys? Would you check it out if I did? I don't want to pour all my time and energy into something and it not go well, if that makes sense.

So just leave a comment down below if you guys would be interested in that. If this book does come to life, I guarantee you I won't publish it until it's completed. Meaning I won't make the story public until it's complete, that way you guys can binge read because I know I binge read.

But yeah just let me know if you guys would be interested in a villain ark story of Tommy. And if you're feeling generous pop by my TikTok page and enjoy the content there. Maybe leave a comment saying you came from Wattpad.

I am going to give you guys a little bit of a teaser and you can give me feedback, please do it would mean so much.

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Teaser

After everything, every single thing the dream has ever done, it's time for revenge. Others view him as a hero, a savior but I know him for what he is. A villain. But it is time for him to meet his match.  I'm the hero of the story. Not Wilbur, not Dream, not George, me, Tommy.
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And here's some of the dialogue that I plan on using, keep in mind this is a rough draft so I didn't bother with quotation marks and going into great detail

What happened to you? You're not the same Tommy and you know that. {tubbo}

What do you mean? I'm still the same I haven't changed. {Tommy}

I don't even recognize you. You're so caught up in your payback act you don't even see that you're changing. You don't even realize that you're just a shell of the person you used to be. You're so consumed in vengeance! {Tubbo}

I'm not consumed with vengeance. He needs to pay, he ruined everything. He may have built this world, but he's destroying it by every second. He's too consumed with power, something has to be done. Someone has to make him pay for everything he's done! {Tommy}

And what would Wilbur say? Do you think Wilbur would want you to do this? Doing this isn't gonna bring Wilbur back. What would Philza say? Or even Techno? {Tubbo}

Don't you dare bring them into this! They want revenge on dream too, in fact everyone does! they're just too intimidated to take action! But that's where I come in, that's where I show up to fix everything he's ever done. {Tommy}

So what? You become the new threat to the server? You become the villain? You'll replace dream and wreak havoc on everyone? {Tubbo}

Become the villain? I could never. I'm not gonna be the villain, no I'm the hero of the story. I'm the one who's gonna fix this and make him pay. {Tommy}

You're so blinded by avenging him that you don't realize that you're gonna be a villain, you don't realize that you're the villain in this! Taking him down might sound like a good idea, but Tommy that's gonna make you a villain. That's gonna make you the bad guy. Why don't you see that? {Tubbo}

Well then, if taking dream down makes me the bad guy... I guess I'm the bad guy. But I will not follow in his footsteps. Once he's been slayed, I will make sure everything goes back to the way it was in the very beginning. {Tommy}
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But please give me feedback, I don't care if it's positive or negative I just need feedback. I don't wanna sit here and pour all of my time and energy into making something that's not even gonna get any reeds.