Well...Didn't think I'd be doing this, but after some thought I realized how much of a trainwreck this is, I mean, I am literally amputating the prologue and first chapter so I can rewrite it to make sense! So it makes sense to start over and just make a new story...I mean
>The book is REALLY historically inaccurate when it doesn't need to
>I planned absolutely nothing, and didn't even have an idea for a direction i was going to go in
>WHY are aussie and NZ kids?
>Why did Ukraine suddenly trust Canada when his basement is full of pictures of people who are now deceased with red X's over them?
>Why is Canada some sort of cold assassin?
>Why did I attach this book to a specific date?
>What happened to Cuba? (I don't even know)
>why is it that Poland physically goes to Canadas house when they suspect soviet may try to kill them?
>what was the point of chapter 8?
>I think I can do a better job
>why stop at rewriting the first 2 chapters? Lets just do a better job with the book
>Why does Canada have Cuba tied up in his basement and then forgot about him completly? (answer: ME)
etc.
Overall, I don't really like some parts of this book, and I'm certain i won't like some parts of my new book either since I'm an amateur, but I also just lost a lot of steam when it came to this book, so, i suppose you can consider this DISCONTINUED? well no actually, its being rewritten, I'll carry over several ideas and things in this book to the other, just, do a better job than this book is really me figuring out how to wattpad...
ON TO IDEAS FOR THIS BOOK!
>Soviet was going to survive and torment Ukraine after his supposed death
>So remember when i said i planned NOTHING? well I actually planned a ending, sorta
So the plan for an ending would be a chapter called 'Russian Roulette' where soviet would play Russian roulette with Canada and promptly lose
>Germany was going to compete with Canada for Ukraine's love, though he really fell for Poland, he thought she would never be with him after...WW2, well Canada would get Ukraine, Poland would confess to Germany, and theres now Gerpol in my book
>America was going to get Canada back into the city by blowing up his house
>Canada would burn down Americas house as an act of vengeance
>Canada would adopt a beaver
>Ukraine and Estonia would become friends aaand now there's finest in my book
>Canada would have a scar in the form of a swastika Third Reich burned into his chest when he and Vichy France captured and tortured him for a bit
>WHO DO I SHIP JAPAN WITH!?!?!? (The land down under probably)
>NO RUSAME
>NO CANAME
>NO RUSCAN
>There's a simp amongst us
>East would either take the purple potion of DEATH and end himself or get shot
>In the attempt to kill soviet, Yugoslavia and Czechoslovakia would be...'Collateral damage'
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Red and Blue
Fanfiction[BEING REWRITTEN!" The world is split in two the Soviet Union and eastern block is yet to collapse, and countries are either for or against communism Among these countries is Canada, hardened by war and trusting Few, he feels betrayed by his family...
