Considering this was my first book on Wattpad, I made no plan for this, and I missed out on a lot of stuff, (Mainly I really like giving Ukraine wings) I am literally amputating the prologue and a few chapters. So why stop there? Why not rewrite this whole book and try to do a better job, especially since I really don't like how I wrote the prologue and second chapter, I aslo have a little list of reasons for me to Rewrite this.
>The book is REALLY historically inaccurate when it doesn't need to
>I planned absolutely nothing, and didn't even have an idea for a direction I was going to go in
>WHY are aussie and NZ kids?
>Why did Ukraine suddenly trust Canada when his basement is full of pictures of people who are now deceased with red X's over them?
>Why is Canada some sort of cold assassin?
>Why did I attach this book to a specific date?
>What happened to Cuba? (I don't even know)
>why is it that Poland physically goes to Canadas house when they suspect soviet may try to kill them?
>what was the point of chapter 8? (Foreshadowing for Ukraine's flag change, but i could have handled it better...)
>I think I can do a better job
>why stop at rewriting the first 2 chapters? Lets just do a better job with the book
>Why does Canada have Cuba tied up in his basement and then forgot about him completely? (answer: ME)
>I'm going to make this book really messing when I start rewriting chapters
I also have an idea for a rewrite, here's that
So Soviets gone and dead, shocking right? Anyways, the idea is that the west didn't actually know soviet has children, so now there trying to figure what to do with said children, since there's like an ocean of them.
While America is on top of the world with his biggest threat now gone, Russia blames the English family for EVERY.SINGLE.Bad thing, that has happened to him, especially soviets' death
While Ukraine is struggling on finding out what she should do, she meets Canada.
So there's the idea, I'll obviously build on it but I think it can work out to the point of not amputating the prologue
But I leave it to you
Should I rewrite this?
I'm leaning towards yes...
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Red and Blue
Fanfiction[BEING REWRITTEN!" The world is split in two the Soviet Union and eastern block is yet to collapse, and countries are either for or against communism Among these countries is Canada, hardened by war and trusting Few, he feels betrayed by his family...
