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Blurb Judge 3 Review: Main Character: 10/10 World: 9/10 Conflict: 9/10 Stakes: 8/10 Enticement: 10/10 Total: 45/50 This is a really good blurb! It's intriguing, unique and ticks all the boxes of explaining main character, world, conflict and stakes. The stakes could be clarified just a little more, but other than that, this blurb is perfect.
Judge 4 Review: Main Character: 10/10 World: 9/10 Conflict: 9/10 Stakes: 7/10 Enticement: 8/10 Total: 43/50 The blurb has me hooked! Well done with all areas! Put a little more work into showing the stakes, though. There are also some sentences that were a bit unclear to be because they were quite vague.
Cover Judge 1 Review: Blurb/Genre Rep: 10/10 Legibility: 9/10 Color Comp.: 5/10 Balance Comp.: 5/10 Overall Impression: 7/10 Total: 36/50 First off, I love the cover image. It looks very interesting off the bat, but I do have to tak off for the font used for the cover. It's very plain and I feel it doesn't match the cover image used. I also think there's a lot going on with the colors that make the cover start to look very messy. The gray title would be fine is you added a drop shadow maybe, but the orange author name is too much and the red 01 is very hard on the eyes.
Jusge 2 Review: Blurb/Genre Rep: 10/10 Legibility: 9.8/10 Color Comp.: 10/10 Balance Comp.: 10/10 Overall Impression: 9.5/10 Total: 49.3/50 My only issue is the placement of the "Blood Magic 01" at the bottom. I feel it is too far left. Scoot that over, and this is a perfect cover. Nicely done!
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