I've noticed that Six's behavior wasn't consistent throughout the story, and by that i mean the way she is portrayed through dialogue and her actions. I've gone back to make edits, specifically removing/replacing scenes where Six's behavior was cute, wholesome, and scenes where she cried when reminded of Mono. I also removed one or two scenes that portrayed the main character as suicidal, the only concerning thing about him im going to leave is his tobacco addiction.
It wasn't until around the kitchen part or the guests part that i decided that six's emotions were supposed to be dull until restoring her soul, and that's when I first started writing it that way, which caused the inconsistency. I figured it was easier to edit a few scenes in old chapters than it was to almost completely rewrite the second half of the story, which took several months, and I was also already nearing the end of the story.
The old chapters were edited on November 28, 2022, and if you began reading this story later than that date, you never saw the original.
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Fictional reality - Little Nightmares
FanfictionFeeling unsatisfied with what happens, you imagine yourself going in and changing it yourself like a child's imagination, when you suddenly seem to feel strange, grabbing what you can, you black out and wake up at the maw, next to a familiar suitcas...
