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Hai! This story actually i dapat inspirasi dari story 'His Code Name Is Alpha' & 'Commando's: His Treasure'

So kalau rasa macam sesetengah scene tu macam hampir sama or sama maybe dari antara dua story tu. But don't worry! I tak ciplak 100% dari story tu. Just masa baca story tu tiba-tiba dapat Ilham pasal story ni hehe.

Actually dah lama story ni terkubur dalam draft even sebelum i start baca dua story tu. And kebetulan story tu relate dgn job male lead kita. So why don't kita take as inspiration.

So Thariq and Ehsan in GGK kan? But this time nah. I'm not interested. So kali ni watak kita dalam story ni diberi 'Muhammad Farhan Hareez' haa panjang kan nama? Hahaha

Pangkat dia biasa aje. Kapten jer. Biasa ah tu. Ehem. So conclusion nya Farhan Hareez not in GGK. Dia tentera biasa.

Move to female lead kita. Both story tu heroin badass and manja kan? Husniya and Dhia both manja dgn laki sendiri. Bezanya Husniya beku girl and Dhia ni lebih kpd manja girl la. Heroin story kita diberikan nama 'Kayla Arissa' cantik kan nama dia hehe.

Okay. Kayla Arissa ni pelakon. Yes an actress gurls. She's freehair so jangan tanya lagi. At first dia like mcm Dhia and at last dia berubah jadi Husniya gitu. Gabungkan hahaha.

At this story, yang tersakiti both lead. Both lead tersakiti. Entah la. Sekarang ni rasa nak buat Kayla je yg sakit not Farhan. But tiba-tiba rasa nak buat Farhan pun sama tersakiti hahaha.

Action? Nah I'm not into action scene sebab i tak pandai buat action scene HAHAHA. But akan ada la action scene tu but tak banyak mcm both story tu.

At last. Story ni not 100% copy that both story. Just as inspiration. Kalau tersama tu, sebab i suka scene tu but not 100%. I ada idea sendiri. I olah guna idea sendiri.

LAGI SEKALI I CAKAP. I TAKE BOTH OF THAT STORY AS INSPIRATION.

Yeah maybe i start write this story cuz my life related to army. Yeah i ada kaitan dengan tentera. But do not expect more in this story. Maybe i related bukan bermaksud i tahu setiap skop pekerjaan tentera tu macam mana k.

Sesiapa tak suka plot story ni, di alu-alukan untuk close this page and keluarkan dari library anda. Saya tidak paksa anda untuk baca story i ni.

Plot story ni ringan² je. Tak heavy mana pun. Kalau ada idea and mood nak tulis, i tulis and update. If takde update tu faham² la. Aku ni bukannya 24 jam hadap wattpad nak perah otak cari idea. Aku pun ada kerja nak buat. Dah nak final exam pon. So i will be very busy.

I buat story ni sebab i suka berangan hahaha. Yela lepas habis baca cerita je mesti angau dgn hero HAHAHA

And don't worry hero heroin in all my story are green flags. I benci red flags. So if tak suka boleh berambus. Orang ketiga? Nah. Ni pun i benci. I more to light romance. So conclusion nya story i semua yg akan datang adalah green flag. Maybe akan ada dari red flag to green flag.

And one more thing. Jangan desak i untuk update please. I have my own life. I'm still a student and currently getting ready for my final exam. Ni pun idea tiba-tiba muncul time i tengah dalam class. Macam bab..🥲

And kalau nak tegur about grammar or tatabahasa, you can direct massage me. Please jangan komen kat story dalam tu. Nak tegur biar la hanya libatkan dua pihak saja. I'll accept semua nasihat cuz i'm still new in author things.

Wattpad ni pun dah berhabuk dalam phone and baru buka balik 🥲

Description story ni already tertulis kan? So baca kat situ jer. I malas nak tulis semula. No plot twist la sebab malas nk fikir² semua ni hahaha. I author yg malas k.

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Okay enough with bebelan. Now move to this story. If you guys still interested in this story, boleh simpan in library and tunggu la i update kalau i ingat lagi hahaha. Rajin² la ingatkan i about this story. I ni pelupa orgnya. Dah start buat story at last lupa nak update hahaha.

Eh sambung bebel pulak. Okay. Now kita kenal² dgn main lead and side lead kita.

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Muhammad Farhan Hareez
33 tahun
180 cm
- Tentera darat pangkat Kapten
- Rapat dengan Khairul and Ayden
- Anggap Tuan Mokhtar macam ayah sendiri
- Ignore Kayla but silently care about her
- Sentiasa jalankan amanah yg diberikan
- have one younger sister


Kayla Arissa
27 tahun
167 cm
- An actress for ten years since form 5 as teens actor.
- Label as popular actress for five years since she in this industry.
- anak tunggal
- have family problem
- trust issues
- anak Tuan Mokhtar

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Side character
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Ayden Saaqib
30 tahun
179 cm
- married to Syaza Aleeya
- polis pangkat Inspektor
- kawan dengan Farhan since high school

*And jangan risau. Ayden Saaqib akan ada story dia sendiri. So watak dia maybe selalu disebut. And Syaza Aleeya also ada but sikit je*


Mia Liana
27 tahun
160 cm
- manager Kayla Arissa also as bestie
- kenal Kayla since kids



Khairul Fahmi
29 tahun
177 cm
- kawan baik Farhan Hareez since awal² mula jadi tentera.
- pangkat Leftenan
- mischievous
- kalau ada peluang, Farhan nak sniper kepala bagi lubang kepala Khairul. Haha joke. Okay mungkin tak pada Farhan.


Erhan Mikael
27 tahun
173 cm
- best friend Kayla and Mia.
- work as stylist Kayla Arissa.
- kau sentuh bestie dia, kau mati dalam tangan dia

Leftenan kolonel Mohd Syed Mokhtar Al-Bukhary
49 tahun
187 cm
- ayah kepada Kayla Arissa
- hilang isteri sepuluh tahun yang lepas.
- selalu manjakan Kayla
- protect his daughter like princess
- kau pegang rambut anak dia, pecah muka kau

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Rasanya itu je la side character yang i terfikir nak wujudkan. Cukup la tu buat pening kepala je nak ingat nama dorang nih.

So as you know. Ayden Saaqib akan ada story dia sendiri. But not now la but soon. Kalau ada idea hm.


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Okay that's all for today! Nanti i update bab 1 okayyy

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