Willpower

Relieved

An1: so look at the An below there's very important questions and there's an ANNOUNCEMENT too!!!!

The door opens and I get tackled by Demi in a hug.
"Oh my god!!" She still was hugging me, "you scared the shit out of me Alisha! I thought you weren't going to make it." She's hugging me so tight.
"Relax Demi. I made it. They just took me off the machines too early." She finally let go. She just looked at me, tears were filling in her eyes.
"Demi. Really. I'm fine. I'm not going anywhere." I bring her into another hug. One by one everyone says hello and hugs me then leaves, all except Demz. She stayed the whole time until the doctors kicked her out so they could do a check up. I was grateful they kicked her out. It was heartbreaking to see her in the state she was. Her face was all read from the crying and her eyes were bloodshot from sleep deprivation. She needed to go home. The doctors let me have my phone back for entertainment. I texted Dianne.

Me: -hey. Are you still in town?-
Dianne: -yeah. Of course. The whole fam is staying at Demi's house. Why?-
Me: -I can't stand to see Demi like this. She needs to go home, at least for a night, but she won't let me out of her sight. Today I went to the bathroom and for a walk while she was napping and when I came back she was flipping out that I nearly gave her a heart attack-
Dianne : -wow! Ok yeah she needs to get away from that place. I'll come talk to her-

An: ok so sorry this is late. I'm having big writers block so it's really short sorry. But yeah. I'll try to make a better chapter next time.

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I'm going to start "forbidden love" soon so look out for that. It's a totally different story than this