Writer's Pet Awards 2023 (Judge Needed)

Poetry Result 1

Dear writer,
I want you to know that, you are very talented and creative, the way you are. If you get a negative comment on your book, I urge you not to get offended. Instead, work it out with your novel and make sure it's best, among the rest. Although, there's no perfect. Try to make your work(s) as perfect as you can. Good luck, romance participants!

1. Feelstora by lemon0804

Title: 10/10
Cover: 8/10
Description: 7/10
Grammar: 10/10
Setting: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 93/100
Position: 3rd

Review: I like the fact that your poems has a great flow and rhythm, but its as if sometimes, you drift away from the subject matter or topic which you write on. The graphics added to the beauty of the poem, and made it more interesting and attractive to read.

2.  Specks of Serendipity by vanessallosa

Title: 10/10
Cover: 10/10
Description: 10/10
Grammar: 10/10
Setting: 7/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 95/100
Position: 1st

Review: First, I must say that you have a good book cover. The green and gold blents perfectly, its such an eye-catcher. I love the graphics you used as well. Your choice of words and use of English flows smoothly, I wasn't disappointed.

Second, to a point, your poems are like dialogues. For example; 'Pillowtalk'. I know dialogues can also be used im poetry, and that there are no rules to poetry, as long as one is creative with it. But, the way you wrote the dialogues easily made me lost in it.

Apart from this, there was no stanza. Poems written in stanza gives quality and realism to a piece or collection of poetry.

3.  Poetically Accurate by darkest112

Title: 10/10
Cover: 8/10
Description: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Setting: 9/10
Plot: 9/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall enjoyment: 9/10
Is the participant a follower? : Yes- 20/20
Total: 94/100
Position: 2nd

Review: Poetically accurate is a nice title for a poem collection. I feel this would fit better in the second line of the poem description.
"Words I couldn't speak so they become poems."

Your description is simple and efficient. The book cover is also good. The two hands on each other shows feeling expressed and withheld. I just feel your poem book deserves something better, maybe it's because of the font or the quality of the picture. Aside from this, I enjoyed reading your poems. Keep it up, author. You're doing great!

4.  Bottle-hearts by YOURS-EXE

Cover: 10/10
Description: 10/10
Grammar: 9/10
Setting: 10/10
Plot: 10/10
Character Development: 10/10
Overall enjoyment: 10/10
Is the participant a follower? : No- 0/20
Total: 79/100
Position: 4th

Review: Your Book cover, title and the poem description synchronised perfectly. I'll say this collection is one of the best poem anthropology I've read so far on Wattpad.

However, the only thing I find challenging is that the poems has no stanza. Its does not have a specific style like haiku, sonnet, free verse, ode, ballad etc. On Wattpad, its not really important but I think you should take this into consideration especially while writing poems, generally. You did amazing job by writing this masterpiece! Keep the ball rolling, dearest!

5.  AdHameedat's Poem and Poetry by AdHameedat

Title: 7/10
Cover: 6/10
Description: 7/10
Grammar: 8/10
Setting: 9/10
Plot: 8/10
Character Development: 9/10
Overall enjoyment: 6/10
Is the participant a follower? : No- 0/20
Total: 60/100
Position: 5th

Your book title is good but it deserves something better. Something like, 'God's Touch' for Religious poems or 'Irony of the Pen' for sad poems. Just a sujjestion. The description told us little or no information about what your poem is all about. I feel you should work on that.

Reading through the poems made me realise that its a religious poem about God's love, creation and grace. Try to write a good description because it helps in boasting the amount of readers and followers you get. Also, you book cover needs to be changed. It should relate with the poem title and theme.

Flipping through the pages, I love your choice of English and use of words. It was easy and straight forward. You have done a great job, poet! Ride on!

Let's acknowledge the judge of this category,Madinah_Writes. Whether you won or not, please don't unfollow your judge, so you won't lose follows, reads and recognition.
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