Teen Fiction Reviews by Laly13 Vol. 2

Review #121: The Fear List

Author: shanrae93

Read it if: you love hating people who messes with people's feelings

Plot:

Sometimes, a mistake is all it takes... Shy girl Molly and bad boy Ren live in two separate worlds. She lives precariously, avoiding mistakes that haunt her past, while he flaunts the rules and lives on the edge. What happens when a bet causes their worlds to collide?

Can Molly let go of her fears one by one and accept Ren, or will her past fears repeat themselves again? And will Ren live up to the bet or will he realize there's more to Molly than he thinks?

Review:

Going to do the good old "pros and cons"

The con of this story is that the plot is pretty much cliché with "they guy who pretends to like the naïve girl to win a bet". If he falls for her and hell breaks loose because she finds out about everything I'll be expecting money from those who don't believe me

Other problem is that the chapters are too long and full of inner thoughts. More action - excess of thoughts and feelings = nice story

The pro of this story is that though the story is cliché, this is the strongest "bet story" I've seen. The signs being: 20 chapters and he has barely changed his mind, and my stone heart feels it's going to break when all hell breaks loose.

note to author:

f you're reading this, thanks for making this. To conclude this review, I love\hate the story. Hate how I see this type of story(which isn't in my good looks) for the 1,000th time, but love the aches I feel sometimes(which doesn't happen often). Hope you update soon, and that the "complete" issue can be solved. Keep writing and take care ;)

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