Teen Fiction Reviews by Laly13 Vol. 2

Review #124: We're Like Fire And Rain

Author: periwinklepizza

read it if: you want a typical teen fiction

plot:

"What the hell?!" I exclaimed. As I look around the room one expression was prominent in everyone's face; shock. They are all shocked that someone punched their king straight in the face and to add insult to my already bruised ego, the one that threw the punch was a girl.

review:

If someone missed the pros and cons, they're back now

the pros are:

-the characters are interesting

-the feels are around

-you can read many chapter withoutnfeeling you're taking a eternity to do so

cons are:

- there isn't anything out of this world(cocky guy+ girl who doesn't take shit from anyone+ lots of banter+ newfound feelings+ crazy situations+ mushiness+ drama= mainstream teen fiction)

-you'll find some plotholes

If you decide to read this or not that's your decision, I'm just a reviewer giving choices

Note to author: if you're reading this, thanks for making this. This book can't be saved from being cliche, but it can be saved from the plotholes and typos(this is my long way of saying you should edit hehe). If I sounded rude here then sorry, but I like to be honest. Keep writing and take care ;)

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