Ookay, so I did come back to this site to delete these because it has been a year and this definetly isn't great and all. But then I decided not to because I feel like I'd be a waste.
HOWEVER
I also came back to a bunch of criticisms (which most were pretty valid if I'm being honest) that I feel could probably be addressed later on. Aria is an oc which is not to be confused with self insert, so she actually has a whole character arc going on, and from all the stories and universes she's been through, she's got a whole categorization issue. Most people do. So sorry if it came off as sexist or smth.
And I wanted to do a whole thing in how Alluka was slowly picking up on good and bad habits of Aria, which was a parallel To Illumi and Killua (obviously to a different degree). Notice how Aria acts somewhat similar to Illumi and Killua? Yeah. And I would have loved to put Illumi in her place, but there were some clear issues with that.
The writing here is...improvable, to say the least, so a lot of these might not have landed. And I'm probably never coming back to this site again after this (I'm not even going to bother with any other works, this one's my favorite, so it gets an authors note)
Unfortunately none of these ideas will ever be implemented because, like, Im dropping this lol.
Also, if you don't know what's going on, or don't like the characterization, this is fanfiction, so just make something up idc.
Deleting all the Aria drawings too, because they burn my eyes
