RISHMIIII

chapter 29

Hey.
I know I am the most annoying person  but I had a doubt whether my story is actually good that it should be continued or it's because I apologised and u all thought I am sad about it so u said soo. I am hundred percent sure my story is not the best there are several other stories too. But I want to know what you guys actually think so kindly leave ur honest feedback in the comments. And please do comment even if it's criticism or something u don't like or some changes u wanted to see. I request u and really sorry for all the trouble  .

Continuing the story.

It's evening rishi prepared everything for his proposal. His phone buzzed.

Ahana: hello Bhai are you done with your preparations bhabhi ko neeche bheju?

Rishi: tune apna kaam kiya?

Ahana: yess aapki di hui dress bhabhi ko try karne ko dedi aur abhi woh change karke ayenge toh unhe sidha neeche leke ajaungi.

Rishi: usse shak nahi hua na?

Ahana: nahi bhai mene kaha mujhe dekhna hai unpe ye dress kaisi lagegi..

Rishi: okay. I am done send her as soon as she is ready.

Rishi calls ayush: hello ayush woh haddi ka khyal rakhna I don't want any interruption.

Ayush: konsi haddi bhai? Ohhh kabab me haddi. Aditya yess boss . U don't worry . best of luck mere bhai.

Rishi: haan thanks aur plan yaad hai na. Mere proposal ke thik baad tu aur ahana sabko leke garden area me ayenge.. Ok I guess Lakshmi aagayi hai byee..
..

Lakshmi : Rishiii?!

Rishi: haan me yahi hoon.

Lakshmi: ahana ne kaha tumhe bohot urgent baat karni hai and abhi nahi gayi toh gadbad ho jayegi..

Rishi saw her: u look... Beautiful...

Lakshmi noticed rishi's suit and the decorations in the garden.

Lakshmi:  Rishi  don't tell me is this ur plan.. Agar bulana hi tha to simply boldete. . Me ajati darr gayi me ki kahi tumhe kuchh...

Rishi held her hand: come.

Lakshmi feared what she thought of after seeing the scene in the garden area might be true..

Rishi made her stand in the centre and he went on his knees.

Rishi: Lakshmi  I know ye bohot zyada fancy sa proposal nahi hai .. Jaise movies me hota hai bohot saare logo ke beech kisi badi si party me... But ye real wala proposal hai simple yet beautiful. Ab me jo kehne wala ho dil se kehne wala hoon please tum bhi dil se sunna..

Me  aaj neeche isliye baitha hu kyuki me tumhe khud se upar rakhta hoon aur humesha rakhunga.. .me shayad tumhe deserve na karta hoon utna perfect na hoon but Me tumhara saathi aur saarthi banunga.. Me khudko tumhare jitna perfect bana dunga.. Kyuki tum ho toh zindagi zindagi lagti hai jisme tum na ho woh har khwaahish adhuri lagti hai.. Will u marry me Lakshmi?

The Oberois and Bajwaas clapped and cheered them .

Lakshmi's worst fears came true she could not decide what she will do now? It felt like she was in another big problem again because of the Oberois but this time the Oberois were innocent.

Lakshmi looked at Rishi's innocent face his smile that she loved in every way. And then the Oberois and her sisters,her bajwa family all those happy smiling faces. And now it was genuine no one held any grudges against her. And suddenly all the flashbacks of events that took place three years ago were in front of her. She was fighting her heart and mind. And Lakshmi suddenly fell her breath getting shorter and quicker. She was soon out of breath.
Rishi immediately got up.

Rishi: Lakshmi Lakshmi.... Open ur eyes.. Lakshmi.... No
..

Lakshmi could see her vision getting blurred and soon she collapsed .

Everyone was shocked Lakshmi was brought inside Rishi rubbed her hands and feet. Aditya came running down with Lakshmi's bag. And started searching for something and he took out a diary and called someone from the given number

Rishi: ye ye kyaa kar rahe ho.

Aditya  paid no heed to rishi: hello yess.. Dr. Ava she had another panic attack... No we are not in Paris we are in India.. Okay thank you thank you....

Ayush had already called the doctor .

Aditya: Sir umm. Here are the treatments she has been following. Inhe panic attack aaya hai this is her 6th panic attack so far..

The doctor checked Lakshmi and saw her prescriptions for the past three years given by Aditya. He gave Lakshmi few medicines and an injection. And went away.

Shalu: Di ko panic attack aate the aur itni baar tumne kyu nahi bataya  agr tumhe pata tha aur hume kyu nahi bola di ne kuch bhi...

Ayush: Aditya kya tha ye sab?

Aditya : kya?.

Dadi: Lakshmi ko kya hua hai?

Aditya: dadi woh usne...

Neelam: hum puch rahe hai use kya hua hai tum batao ge? Ya hum khud un doctor ko call kare

Rishi grabbed Aditya by her collar: Meri Lakshmi ko kya hua? Panic attack?! Kaise hua ye sab tu batayega aur abhi nahi bataya toh woh haal karunga jo shayad kisi ne imagine nahi kiya..

Aditya: ab mere samjh ataa hai Lakshmi ne kyu manaa kiya tha ye sab aap logo se batane ke liye. 

Ahana: Aditya please bhabhi ki condition ke baare me sach kaho... Please...

Aditya: although she requested ki ye sab aaplogo ko nahi pata chalna chaiye but aaplog ki concern dekh kar.. I want to tell u... Lakshmi ko panic attacks arahe the she had her 2nd panic attack when I was driving her back home . Uss din she was missing u all it was Rishi's birthday and she was sad.. Lekin achanak se she had various symptoms. Me use doctor ke paas leke gaya and waha she told her about her first panic attack jo use malishka aur rishi ke sach ke baad mila tha and then she had anxiety too .. Rudra bhaiya bhi sabh jaante the but woh shalu bani ko pareshan nahi dekhna chahte the. Aur Lakshmi woh toh kabhi bhi kisi ko nahi bolti agar uss din me aur Rudra bhaiya use leke nahi jaate.... Rishi trust me in 3 saalon me Lakshmi ne pura ek saal tumhe miss kiya hai tumhari family ki fikr ki hai.. Aur at times when she missed u all so much aur she had faced discrimination and uski style ko,simplicity ko sabne accept nahi kiya aur exhaust bhi hoti thi ki use panic attacks aane lage..

Rishi sat on the floor with a thud sound. He jad tears..

Rishi: Sab meri galti hai meri wajah se woh dur gyi sabse.. I am sorry lakshmi..

Neelam: nahi rishi ismein tumhari koi galti nahi hai..

Rishi: nahi mom meri hi galti.. Usse appointment letter pehle hi mil gya tha usne ek month ka time liya tha but woh usi di gyi kyuki woh hume space dena chahti thi...

Aditya: but ye proposal pe panic attack kyu ayaa? Lakshmi loves u rishi .. Tumhare liye bohot royi thi woh use toh yes keh dena tha.

Ayush : bhabhi ko hosh aaane do unse hi puch lenge..

Rishi: aap sab jaiye me huu yaha..

Everyone left..

Rishi looked at lakshmi. He held her hand and apologized..

sorry this proposal didn't work out too. I am sorry but I promise the final proposal will be there  in the next one. And it will be the most special one.