36:yn's painful past/first kiss

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I really want your comments regarding this chapter. It really demotivate me when no one tells me how I'm writing.

I feel like my story line is getting boring.
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Authors pov:

"relax, it's me" taehyung whispered as his one hand was holding her waist from behind. As he rest his chin on her shoulder as ask
"How was your day, today? Do you like it?"

Yn ignore the butterflies she having and answered "it was beautiful day I have ever hand since long. Thankyou. I'm happy today" she smile.

"Ofcourse you should be happy today afterall it's your birthday" he speak near her neck and bump the side of his head with hers.

Where yn frozen on the spot hearing his words. She widen her eyes when taehyung brought the mini cake infront of her, from his behind he was holding with his other hand.

As he whispered near her ear "happy birthday princess~" her eyes started to filled with tears as he move in front of her.

He hold her hand and made her sit on sand. As he sat beside her.
"H-how do you know?" She can't help but ask.

"I told you i have my own ways" he said and wink.

"Now don't ask and make a wish as Candle won't work in this wind you know" he said cheerfully and handed her knife.

She look at him and wipe her tears. Clapping her together she close her eyes to made wish. After some seconds she felt lips on her forehead making her eyes open.

Yeah taehyung kiss on her forehead as he smile and said "i hope your all wishes come truth" i will make sure of it. He said with smile and last part to himself ofcourse.

"Now don't look at me like i have two faces. Cut the cake" he said with his boxy smile making her smile as well. He sing happy birthday song for her as she cut the cake and fed him. The both fed each other.

After that taehyung keep remaining cake besides him as he sat behind her. Making her confuse. Not after so soon she felt cold metal on her neck.

 Not after so soon she felt cold metal on her neck

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