Broken

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okay so i know i have posted a lot of new stories, but when i get an idea i have to shre it befroe someone else takes it and different versions are made, so i hope you like it :)

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*BANG* *BANG* *BANG*

I shot up out of my bed with my heart pounding from hearing noises down stairs. I pulled back the covers and slowly made my way to my bed room door.

It seemed like someone was crying, calling out for help. But who was down there?

I crept down stairs to see a dreadful scene. My mum was lying in a puddle of red paint.

Tears blurred my vision. What happened?

I was about to take another step down so I’d be in full view of what was happening but my dad’s voice broke the silence and someone’s footsteps were heard.

“Please don’t shoot, I have a daughter that needs a parent, please don’t shoot, if you want money I’ll give it to you, just please don’t shoot.”

He sounded scared, I was scared.

“SHUT UP! SHUT UP. I’m doing you a favour. Don’t you see!?! I don’t want your filthy money, I suggest if you want to live shut the hell up and let me finish my job.”

I started to shake, mum was dead, and nothing could bring her back. Someone was hurting my dad and I don’t know what to do.

Before I knew it I had stepped down the last of the steps. Dad saw me and fear ran through my body.

“Daddy what’s going on, why is mummy covered in red paint?”

Maybe this wasn’t such a good idea after all.

“MAGGIE GET BACK UP STAIRS HURRY!”

I stood there frozen, I thought I knew what was going on, but I didn’t. It was much worse than I had imagined.

A man that looked older than my dad was hovering over my dad with a silver gun pointed at his head.

“So this is the famous Maggie you have been telling me about, your right she just looks like her mother.”

I looked in between the man and my dad. The man looked like he was concentrating on the gun other than my dad.

“Please don’t hurt her.”

I heard my dad choke back sobs, which made me die a little inside.

“Come here, I won’t hurt you.”

The older man extended his hand for me to grab it. I looked over to my dad and saw him nod his head continuously.

I grabbed the man’s hand and walked as he pulled me forward over to my dad’s side.

“Now I can finish what I had started a moment ago.”

I looked down at my dad who was struggling on the floor. I saw that he had multiple wounds on his leg and stomach.

My chest tightened in fear.

The man grabbed on to my shoulders a little too tight.

“You know Maggie. Your dad here has done some nasty things to me. I don’t think I can ever forgive him, and nothing will ever make up for it.”

A tear rolled down my cheek as I watched my dad in pain.

“Please don’t hurt her. Please I beg you.”

“I TOLD YOU TO SHUT UP!”

My body tensed and my tears rolled down faster.

“Please don’t hurt us.”

I said it quietly and started to sob.

“Oh don’t worry Maggie, I won’t hurt you, you haven’t done anything wrong.”

I nodded.

But it was too soon. The man had said something under his breath.

He grabbed my shoulders with one arm and held me close to his body, while the other hand stretched out and held the gun up against my dad’s head.

“Maggie remember that your mother and I love you very much, and were sorry. I love you sweet heart.”

I opened my mouth to say something but it was cut off.

*BANG*

It felt like I was choking on my own heart. Coldness took over my body.

My heart had died, along with my dad.

“It’s okay sweet heart, they are both were they belong now, and for you. Have a nice life.”

I slowly turned around to face the man, but wasn’t quick enough.

He hit me at the back of my head with I guess the gun.

I stumbled on the floor next to my father’s dead body.

I head faint foot prints then ended with the faint sound of the house alarm going off.

I felt warm liquid around me, but I couldn’t get up.

My head pounded yet it felt light.

I slowly closed my eyes as the pain got worse.

The last thing I saw was my dad’s dead body leaning up against the kitchen block covered in his own blood.

And I lie with it.

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