After the long wait, the Esthetiques are here with the results. We thank all the participants for participating and making this contest possible. We look forward to your entries in future contests. We are glad to read your entries. Don't be disheartened despite the results.
Since we got less entries than we thought, we only have one winner for this round. Make sure to tag your friends you think will be interested in the future contests!
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Review:
The title is clear and the reader knows what the story is going to be based on.
The story was made interesting by the words and phrases that were brought together by the writer. I liked the writing style and the fact that there was not a single moment that I felt confused was a bonus factor. The writer used words and phrases that made the image of what scene was being conveyed at the moment. I enjoyed the story as a whole. It flowed from word to word to sentence and phrases. The play with words made the story quite interesting as well.
The opening statement created a sense of mystery and I wanted to read more and going onto the first paragraph I was not disappointed. The ending however, I have to admit was expected hence it did not have the surprise element.
The story was slowly built up as we got to see the point of view of two different people leading on to the moments that they managed to meet. The moment through how the butterfly was a factor in their fate was also depicted perfectly. The writer managed to show the character's traits through the actions and way of speaking perfectly. And the writer also managed to show how the characters were viewed by the character's interacting with them.
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Again, thank you for participating and making this contest possible! Congratulations to the winner and participants, don't be disheartened. More contests await you and there's a long road for improvement.
See you all around the next contests! Those who want their review, please pm the community's account.
