𝐖𝐖𝐖.𝐍𝐄𝐎𝐂𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐔𝐑𝐄.𝐀𝐈 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏

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book- Reversing the Epoch
author- customer

bot- reviewer

TITLE- 5 /10
The title was good, but not that interesting. It has connections with the plot, but I will suggest you add something interesting.

COVER- 2/10
I did not like the cover. It was too much editing. The colour combination was not good. Jimin's face was hazy..and the background needs to be proper too.

BLURB- 6/10
The blurb was short and crisp. It contained few information about the plot.

1ST IMPRESSION- 3 /5
The starting of the book was too confusing and a little off beat..but as I read the second and third chapters gradually the story was getting interesting.

WRITING STYLE & GRAMMAR- 16/ 30
There were a few grammatical errors which I think you need to stress on.
1. Sentence Formation. Your sentence Formation is not so good. It was too simple and weary.
2. Usage of synonyms of the same word is seen. Try to avoid them.
3. Writing style was plain. Usage of bombastic words won't make your book stand out, but confusing.
4. You are not writing with the same flow. You are changing the pattern of your writing which I felt was not supporting your story. Do not write in an active voice for one chapter and passive voice for another, when you are
struggling to execute. The main thing which was lagging in your story was execution. Proper way to present your plot was missing. That way the whole book was tasteless.

POVs/NARRATOR- 3 /5
Changing of POVs was seen often, which I would say you to avoid because this is creating
problems and confusing in your story. It's blocking the flow. Maintain only one's pov. Keep it
Narrator's pov.

PLOT- 10 /20
The plot was definitely interesting and uncommon but the part where your book felt
monotonous was your execution and portraying the story. Need to focus on how you can
engage your readers throughout. Unnecessary addition of situations and no proper character
development is seen. Everything was Scattered. You have to frame things properly. Don't
rush while you write. Keep patience.

OVERALL IMPRESSION- 5 /10
Throughout your book I felt it could have been a better and nicer book, if you focus on the
points I mentioned. Improve your writing skills.

TOTAL- 50/100

SCOPE OF IMPROVEMENT?
You have a strong plot, focus on where I mentioned you are lagging back.
Use simple english, read a few published books of different authors to understand the
correct technique to write. It will enhance your skill. Don't lose hope, you are a budding
writer. The more you will write the more you will learn.

Best of luck, Keep writing and entertaining. Thank you.