𝐖𝐖𝐖.𝐍𝐄𝐎𝐂𝐔𝐋𝐓𝐔𝐑𝐄.𝐀𝐈 𝐑𝐄𝐕𝐈𝐄𝐖 𝐒𝐇𝐎𝐏

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Fragments of a silent symphony
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Reviewer

Anthology Title: 8/10

The title is pretty good and appealing.

Cover: 5/10

The book cover has its own significance in a story or in a novel, but as an anthology book the cover looks good but the texts is too bright and glittery, write it in a different font and color.

Grammar and Vocabulary:  12/20

There were places where you need to rephrase lines and even paragraphs.
You have a good Vocabulary. But you are writing poems, but what you have written actually is cannot be considered as poems because in between poems you cannot add quotation ("....". He said.)  Which you only can write while writing a story.

There's no hard and fast rule that poems meaning it will rhyme, but poems should have definite lines and punctuation marks which is missing. 

Originality  & Creativity  : 17/20

You have written those lines or rather paragraphs in a very different way , which I truly appreciate. I enjoyed reading the piece.

Coherence of form and structure (writing style) :  10/20

You have also added a detailed blurb which is very nicely written and that's how authors should write it.

You have to be clear that you want to write poems. You have merged formats writing a story/ poems and Journal. I was having difficulties understanding whether it is a story or a set of poems. You have to be clear to the audience. You have to be precise. Try to improve your writing style.

Overall Presentation: 14/20

You have a very strong content and it can turn out be a very good book if you can do the execution well. You have potential your have potential to do much better. Just be clear, what you want to write- a story/ novel or a set of couplets. It will give a wide vision to think and do great. Keep writing.

Total 66/100