I wanna start by saying I went back and fixed shit so ye.
Uhhhh.
To be honest, this book was supposed have a bunch of side plots and shit.
When I came up with idea, I was an angsty teen in denial.
I still need to go back and fix shit so I'll do that later.
While I was writing this, I had burnout from school and shit, so there like a 4 month gap from like chapter 6 and chapter 7.
One side plot was supposed to be Butters and Kenny.. doing couple shit..
It was supposed to be cute but I didn't do it 😞
So Kenny got a brief mention instead. He was the boyfriend that was discreetly mentioned in chapter one 🥱
Pip and Kyle were supposed to be friends. I didn't do that either. Mainly because I felt Kyle wouldn't actually be friends with Pip, just apologize because he felt bad.
Damien was supposed the hang out with the goth kids. I don't have a reason, I just didn't do it. I don't even know why I didn't do it.
This book was supposed to be WAYYY different.
I might remake so I don't really wanna spoil it. 🥱
So yeah, that's it.
bye 😋
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☆Indifference☆ A Damien x Pip fic ~ covers not mine ~
Hayran KurguPhillip "Pip" Pirrup moves to South Park. He doesn't plan on staying long, he's always moving around. He's kind to people at school because it's appropriate, outside of school... he can be a totally different person. Damien Thorn is many things, k...
