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Words in bold are to indicate which character is speaking.
Underlined text is for explanations of situations in general.
*Text in italics and between asterisks is for actions and thoughts*.
--- The use of the midscript is for scene change or time changes. ---
(The use of the in parentheses is for clarification within the texts)
//The use of diagonals is for the narrator (imagine that it is the voice of the guard for a greater investment in the story, it is also in bold because it is an extra character). //
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---Continuing with the previous part---
Peter HoM *Brings Spider-Man 616 Closer to Himself*: After so many years... See you again... Peter *The I would say in a macabre and breathy way*.
Spider-Man: Don't worry, we just want to talk. *Raising hands in peace*.
Peter HoM: I can't be until you're forgotten, so keep your words to yourself. *He coldly declared*.
Spider-Man: Look, I got it, I did a lot of wrong to deny you and leave you in oblivion, that's why I want to fix it. *He would say sorry for his past actions*.
Peter HoM: What do you fix, fix more 3 years of loneliness, fix that you took from me all my life, fix that you just abandoned me? *Proceed to crash into the front walls with Spider-Man 616 taking all the damage, all the way out of the building*.
Doctor Strange *Starts following them*: Help the other Peter. *He would tell Clea*
//Narrator//
Spider-Man 616 managed to break free from Peter HoM's grip and throw webs in his eyes, falling to the ground and quickly standing up.
Peter HoM brushes the cobwebs off his face and looks at Spider-Man 616 with an incredible anger in his being. He proceeds to throw pumpkin bombs and laser beams from his fingers trying to kill Spider-Man 616.
Spider-Man 616 is limited to dodging attacks with extreme difficulty.
Peter HoM, seeing that this didn't work, decided to make a more direct confrontation. Swooping down to Spider-Man 616 who only jumped backwards to avoid the blow.
The two started fighting destroying the whole place in their path, Peter HoM would be very aggressive, and Spider-Man 616 was more defensive as he wanted to continue talking to him.
Todo pasaba mientras Doctor Strange solo podía observar impotente ya que en su estado actual no era capaz de ayudar directamente a su amigo arácnido.
---Returning to the other group of heroes---
//End of Narrative//
Clea: Quick, get up, your counterparts need you *I would say very worried about the situation*.
Doc. Parker: That's what I do, but I'm not used to this. *He exclaims, pained by the explosion*.
Clea: This is worse than I thought, somehow being in this place strengthened it exponentially , when it should have stagnated. *He would reflect on what happened*.
Doc. Parker: Whatever it is, but what we need to do is support Spider-Man *Preparing the big web-slinger*.
Clea: I saw a car outside, use it. *I quickly advise*.
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Fixing Spider-Man 616, without having to reboot the entire universe
RandomI'll use elements from the comics to fix the entire story of Spider-Man 616 since its stagnation in the comics. First, I'll mention the problems that comics have in general. Then I'm going to make a story as such where I'll solve everything I can. C...
