Fixing Spider-Man 616, without having to reboot the entire universe

Chapter 10. One appointment and five problems.

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Words in bold are to indicate which character is speaking.

Underlined text is for explanations of situations in general.

*Text in italics and between asterisks is for actions and thoughts*.

---The use of middle script is for scene change or time changes. ---

//The use of diagonals is for the narrator (imagine it is the voice of the watchman for a greater investment in the story). //

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//Narrator//

Five days have passed Peter managed to sell the patent of the USB Laptop Enhancer successfully, now he had more money in his pocket to spend, this would make anyone stop to start having a life of luxuries and excesses, but Peter knew that the best thing was to control expenses and continue working since one does not always do well in things and an emergency can happen that requires a lot of money.

As Spider-Man as always, he is helping civilians in everyday problems, stopping crimes of all kinds, helping other heroes with their problems especially with mutants since they lost their island Krakoa and are now adapting to live as it was before. During his patrols he checked the alleys and in garbage containers, since he learned the hard way years ago that there are very bad people and people in trouble that he cannot see normally. Luckily, he found nothing.

In Peter's personal life things were good at first as he went out partying with Michelle who invited her friends without telling her, who were the members of the Syndicate who were (She) Beetle, (She) Electro, Lady Octopus, Scorpia and White Rabbit. The situation was a bit awkward as they were aware of Peter's relationship with Spider-Man and Peter clearly knew who they were.

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Peter can be seen in a bar with Michelle's friends sitting at a large table a little apart from the other customers.

Michelle: Well girls he's Peter, Peter they're Janice Lincoln, Francine Frye, Carolyn Trainer, Elaine Coll, Lorina Dodson *She points to each of her friends*.

Peter: Hi girls *Say helloes a little uncomfortable*.

Janice Lincoln (She Beetle): Hi Parker *She greets him reluctantly since she knew him from being her ex-Randy's roommate*.

Francine Frye (She Electro): What's up *She would respond in a simple way being the most relaxed of the group*.

Carolyn Trainer (Lady Octopus): Hi Peter *She would say politely, but I could tell her displeasure*.

Elaine Coll (Scorpia): Hi *She would say dryly*.

Lorina Dodson (White Rabbit): Hello loser *She would say hello rudely*.

All of them looking at Peter with distrust, this being noticed by Michelle.

Michelle: Calm down girls, we're all here to have fun, aren't we, Peter? *She would say trying to calm the atmosphere*.

Peter: If that was a plan *He saw every single expression of Michelle's friends*.

One of the bar's waitresses arrives with the group.

Waitress: They want something to drink *She asks the group nicely, although Peter looks funny for a second*.

Peter: Normal soda is fine *He would respond a little uncomfortable about the situation*.