Before going further or I update more, here's some things about Taylor/Lotus' new designs and character.
About Taylor:
1: Taylor's redesign is based off Thorn from the Hex Girls. I was going for a darker clothing design but kept the look simple.
2: She doesn't like showing the jade earing she wore. That was also my way of showing what the Jade Emperor did to save her from the Lotus Family.
3: She's an in the closet horse girl. I wanted to incorporate that into her because I'm actually a horse girl too. Call me Blitz with a silent O, if you want, but I'm proud of it.
4: It has been said in the story that a lot of her classmates in high school thought she was Lesbian because she was a tomboy. That's another trait I incorporated into her because I went through the same thing.
5: I gave her a burn scar on her hand to show she was burnt there when she got the scar over her eye.
6: She felt more comfortable telling her mom, Wukong, and Macaque about her reoccurring dreams than her dad and Danny.
7: When she started talking to Macaque more, she wished he was her older brother her whole life.
8: She secretly adopted Mk and Mei in her head before her monkey transformation.
9: Taylor prefers peppermint coffee or caramel coffee over any other morning drink. But if they're out of caffeine, she will have hot chocolate instead.
10: Hates the smell of cigarettes. This is another trait I have because some people in my family were smokers, and the smell makes me nauseous. This trait will be in other oc's too.
11: Not a huge tea drinker, to her it's hot or cold leaf juice. (Sorry, Iroh.)
About Lotus:
1: She and Macaque are actually twins, which is how they can sense each other so easily.
2: Another reason she married Wukong is because she was a horse girl back then too. So being Pi Ma Wen back then also had another perk when celestial horses are your wingmen.
3: She is the true moon, while Macaque is the night sky, and Wukong is the sun. She'll often tell a story of how the moon fell for the sun on a solar eclipse, symbolizing how she met Wukong and was reunited with her brother.
4: She once tricked Tang into thinking she dyes her pink highlighted fur when he was asking her questions.
5: She still uses a sword and bow, but prefers her staff more when fighting.
6: She can sing but doesn't unless she wants to.
7: She also has shapeshifting since Wukong taught her how to do that, but she rarely uses that power unless she has to.
8: She does have a tramp stamp that can't be seen under her fur. She went through a rebellious phase while she was a human teen and does regret getting it done.
9: Still prefers peppermint or caramel coffee but will occasionally drink tea.
10: Still hates the smell of cigarettes, especially since her sense of smell is now enhanced.
11: Can heal people with her fire but can also burn people depending on her emotions. It's like Pink Diamond from Steven Universe, if she feels deep anger she'll have burning flames, and if she's deeply calm, she'll have healing fire.
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