comments from yours truly

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Okay all my lovely readers, that last chapter just killed me.. Rayne did her best to get Harry to trust her and I think she did an amazing job.

You may think I'm crazy but Rayne is as real to me as actual living people are. Because I base her loosely off of what I am, she is a part of me, and I relate to her.

Just be warned, I'm going to give Harry the life I wished he would have had. But still have Harry be himself because JKR did a wonderful job of creating him. I'll try to stay true to the original characters and develope Rayne as well...

Comments from the characters (and me)

Sirius: Alrighty the last chapter was good.. and I WASNT MISTY EYED there was just a lot of dust in the air.

Me: Whatever waves your wand Sirus... and thanks

Remus: I personally loved it, Lucia.

Rayne: I couldn't just be mean to him.. Like I said Harry's my brother.

Harry: I always wanted a sister... Thanks Luica.

Me: Awe thanks you guys

Snape: it's so....disgusting.  *sneers*

Sirius: Oh shut it Snivellus. No one needs your greasy comments.

The rest of us: Guys knock it off
Sorry bout that... lol

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