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Extra Chapters, first drafts and silly facts about the characters :D
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Alternate Chapter 10...
This was my first draft for Chapter 10 but I ended up changing it because I didn't really like the delivery for some of the lines and felt that it "wasn't the right time..."
Also, since this is a first draft it is not complete nor is it fully edited so please forgive my poor spelling and incorrect grammar
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Mars makes her way to Luna's house walking in the middle of the road seeing as she doesn't need to worry about getting hit by a car. Once she makes it to lunas house and into her room she finds Luna sitting on the floor wearing a black sweater with purple eyes sewn into various parts of the sweater patently watching a small radio that is humming with static.
Mars sits down across from her closes her eyes and places a hand on the radio
The static stops
Mars feels the Tie as it wraps around her hand, she opens her eyes to see Luna, her eyes lit up with excitement waiting for mars to say something
"Hey Luna," Mars says
"Hi Mars!" Luna says waving her hands happily at the radio
Mars laughs for a second before saying "I've got some info that might be useful for getting my body back from Ajax"
"Oh? What is it?" Luna asks, interested in what Mars has to say
"Okay so you know how I'm able to interact with stuff?" Mars says
"Yeah?" Luna replies, nodding her head
"Im able to do that by using these things called Ties, they're basically the heart of any tangible object and I can use them to connect with stuff, that how i was able to move the planchette and talk to you through this radio! Its also how Ajax was able to steal my body." Mars says
"Oh that gives me an idea!" Luna says as she gets up from the floor and walked over to her desk "Quick question, can you connect to multiple things at once?"
Mars think about it for a moment before saying "I dunno, i've never really tried it before."
Luna rummages around through one of the cabinets on her desk and pull out a pair of glasses,
"These are my blue light glasses and i was wondering if maybe you connecting to them would let me see you!"
"Oh yeah! That's a great idea" Mars says excitedly
"Okay, so i'm just gonna but these right here..." luna says placing the glasses down next to the radio "Whenever your ready" she says with a smile
Mars reaches out to the glasses to try and connect to them but just as she started to feel the Tie from the glasses she felt the one connecting her to the radio slip away but she kept going.
Once mars opened her eyes she pulled her hand away can connected to it was a small orange sting that connected the top left corner of Luna's glasses to her left hand. Her left hand was wrapped in the string almost completely covering it...
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Teen FictionWhen a depressed 9th grader named Mars is offered an ominous deal she has no choice but to take it. (TW: Swearing, implications of suicide)
