Get Tannen - reuploaded

Ch 11

Marty commented to himself, "Alright, Grandpa."

Emmett had gone over to his car and pouted, "Aw my poor car. Estelle is going to be so upset if she ever comes back home..."

Edna came up to him, "I believe I owe you an apology, Mr. Brown. Thanks to your ridiculous contraption, Hill Valley's most notorious criminal is finally headed to prison."

Emmett shook his head, "No apologies necessary, Miss Strickland. My rocket car may have accidentally saved the day, but only because it's a complete out-of-control failure. I need a new idea."

Edna suggested, "If you are willing to listen, I might have a few suggestions."

Emmett brightened, "But first, we should take in a movie."

Edna replied, "I'm all yours, Mr. Brown."

Emmett told her, "I think you'll like it. It's all about a brilliant scientist with an overabundance of hubris..."

With that, the two of them walked up to the theater.

Marty commented, "Whew!" He turned to Einstein and added, "C'mon Einy, let's go find Doc."

Einstein barked in agreement.

...

After a bit, the De Lorean was flying over Hill Valley. Marty was driving while Doc and Einstein were in the passenger seat.

Marty commented, "Thanks for letting me fly the De Lorean, Doc. This is a blast."

Doc stated, "Well, maybe next time we should let Annie take a turn."

Marty frowned, "Think she's back to normal now?"

Doc replied, "I don't see why she shouldn't be. Kid's in jail, my younger self should be going to see 'Frankenstein' by now, and there is no more Tannen Crime Family."

Einstein barked as Marty laughed, "And we remembered Einy this time, too!"

Doc was reading the paper that he had brought from 1986 and read a loud, "Hill Valley Crime Rate At All Time Low. Hmm..."

Marty replied, "Except for my grandfather necking with Trixie, I think we're ready to bo back to 1986."

Doc asked, "Do you feel yourself fading out of existence?"

Marty answered, "No, not really."

Doc stated, "Then, as long your father is born in seven years, I say we let your grandfather sow his oats."

Marty asked, "Sowing oats...is that going on with you and Edna?"

Doc was confused, "What are you talking about?"

Marty explained, "Emmett and Edna...they are going to see Frankenstein together."

True to his word, Emmett and Edna were almost at the theater.

Doc muttered, "That's odd..."

Doc brought out his Frankenstein stub that he always carried with him and paled. It was starting to fade out of existence. Shit.

"Great Scott!" Doc finally managed to say.

Marty turned to him and asked, "What?"

Emmett had gotten to a couple and started to talk to them. They were in line for tickets. Edna looked disgusted and walked off. Emmett went after her as they took each other's hands. They smiled at each other.

Doc tried to warn, "We've got to get back in..."

The De Lorean was already preparing to go back to the future.

Doc started to say, "Stop the car! This could be disastrous for everyone..."

Marty tried to turn the De Lorean but it was of no use, they were starting to go back to the future.

Marty cried out, "Doc!"

...

The next thing Marty knew, the De Lorean had arrived back in 1986. It was so out of control, going this way and the other. Marty screamed, just barely avoiding the sign for Hill Valley in four miles. The De Lorean finally crashed through a billboard. Marty rubbed his neck, groaning. That's when he noticed something. Doc and Einstein weren't in the car.

Marty wondered, "Where'd you go, Doc?"

"RELAX!"

The sudden voice of what sounded like Doc startled Marty.

"WE'VE GOT EVERYTHING UNDER CONTROL!"

Marty took a look at the billboard and saw a balder version of Doc on it, calling him First Citizen Brown. "Doc?" He asked.

The sign read, 'Welcome to Hill Valley. Relax...we've got everything under control.'

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To Be Continued...

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Wishmaker1028: Well, isn't this an interesting turn of events? Now, since I am hoping the internet at our house will be back on Wednesday, the goal is to start Citizen Brown that day. If not, I'll have to wait. The reason I'm doing all of this now is when the hurricane hit, the place I was working at went underwater for a couple of days. They had closed the building and they won't get back up and running until mid November. So I am currently looking for a different job. It has been a literal nightmare. I also do want to apologize for making this chapter so short but at least I got this story done. Citizen Brown, if all goes well, should be uploaded either Wednesday or Thursday. And it will get dark. Warned you guys ahead of time. But the family and I are safe - it has just been a literal nightmare. So I hope if we do this right, I should be uploading again like I used to, every other day. Please read and review! And always think outside of the box!