❝ Giggles erupted past my mouth,
Lies slithered past your tongue.
Our relationship soon headed south
Then the truth sung.❞
•┈••✦ 🖤 ✦••┈••┈••✦ 🖤 ✦••┈••┈••✦ 🖤 ✦••┈••┈••✦ 🖤 ✦••┈••┈••✦ 🖤 ✦•••┈••✦ 🖤
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𓂃˖˳·˖ ִֶָ ⋆🌷͙⋆ ִֶָ˖·˳˖𓂃 ִֶָ
❝ Cold caresses many,
as laughter echos around.
Everything was ready,
to welcome Winter, now crowned.
Hearts content and happy,
bitter bodies lay aloud.
Hands full of candy,
truth finally bowed.
Beautifully broken hearts were seen,
under the scaffold.
No one intervened,
some were even baffled.
Scintillant snowflakes land,
Fellow plates were giggling.
It's branches were the wise hands,
to stop the succulent sizzling.
Noses red from the cold,
comes a murky mist.
'I wonder can Winter mold,
humans against rancid risks?
Blankets of snow covered Alina,
as fascinating fireplaces lit up.
I was far away from Lima,
only to get stuck.
Sun was up,
but clouds were shaky.
'It was all about trust,
to tackle the ones hazy.'
Cobblestones groan in dismay,
as the bodies become silent.
They were almost midway,
to shrivel the ones vibrant.❞
𓂃˖˳·˖ ִֶָ ⋆🌷͙⋆ ִֶָ˖·˳˖𓂃 ִֶָ
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𓂃˖˳·˖ ִֶָ ⋆🌷͙⋆ ִֶָ˖·˳˖𓂃 ִֶָ
>| Central Idea:
The poem reflects the complexity of human emotions during winter, contrasting feelings of joy, sadness, and nostalgia. It captures the essence of winter as a time of both beauty and hardship, showing how the season affects individuals in different ways.
>| Context:
The poem may be reflective of the speaker's personal experiences or a universal experience shared by many during winter. The poem explores the emotional landscape shaped by winter, using it as a backdrop for human experiences of joy, sorrow, and introspection. While specific locations are mentioned (like Lima), the poem seems to evoke a general winter landscape that could apply to various settings.
The narrative appears to take place during winter, likely around the holiday season, evoking feelings of nostalgia and reflection. The poem seeks to convey the complexities of human emotions during winter, illustrating how the season can serve as both a time of joy and a catalyst for introspection and vulnerability. It invites readers to consider their own feelings and memories associated with this season.
(Analysis done by AI)
𓂃˖˳·˖ ִֶָ ⋆🌷͙⋆ ִֶָ˖·˳˖𓂃 ִֶָ
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This book has won the second place in 'The Flames Awards' hosted by @HJ_Fiction !! Here are the words of the judge:
"This poetry is fabulous and deeper when one understands or further relate to it. The message is hidden in the words and not like showing off to everyone who reads it and that is something very good! The line breaking/spacing was awesome and the rhythmic flow helped the condition. Grammar and punctuation were outstanding. The poet truly gave voice to the poem, and it is very beautiful. Very good job, keep it up. "
Thank you @Moonfication , I appreciate your words.
