(Light of Ruin - Arc)
Shut-in lazy Y/N who still lives with his parents, dies of extreme body fatigue but reincarnates as The Traveler into a world full of spirits, Shady Business Corporations, and wacky shenanigans.
Sup, I'm busy doing school and work... and more work... and stuff. Haven't had any real time to write and stuff, and I've been dealing with some... stuff.
Sadly my drawing tablet is a lost cause, rip. I'll be using my very outdated iPhone to draw, If you don't mind.
Lately I've gained some time for myself and I began writing again, I had trouble with this one, I had a-lot of new ideas that I really didn't want to forget.
And I completely neglected this book, but having renewed my imagination, I'll be editing some of the chapters, along with continuing to plan out the plot.
I'll be honest with you, I'm not very happy with this book, I honestly think I neglected a lot of the characters and the spirits. Of course I had this realization a month ago. The story is agonizingly slow and the build up sucks. Along with (in my opinion) really really stupid dialogue that sounds like an AI wrote it.
I think I'll rewrite this story later on at some point, but first I'll have to focus on completing the book.
Also please give me some constructive criticism, I'm wanting to improve on my writing so my stories aren't so boring.
Chapters will come out on December!
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