Madori p.o.v
About 30 minutes later we pulled up in front of my house. I was getting ready to get out but Quinn grabbed my wrist.
"Madori remember what I said about my money." He said still holding my wrist.
"I am damn can you just let me go." I said struggling to get my arm free. He tightened his grip on my wrist and used his other hand to grab my neck.
"Look bitch I don't know who you think you talkin to, but you needa check that shiit real fast." He said while looking me right into my eyes. All you could see was hatred. Wasn't no love in him. He let me go and I hurried up and got out the car. I pulled out my key and saw Ashton on the couch.
"Wassup ashton." I said trying to hurry upstairs.
"Nahh bring dat ass here." She said getting up off the couch. I came back down and stood in front of her.
"Dori I know you wasn't out with that wanna be thug was you."
"And if I was?" I said with a attitude. Ever since I met Quinn she been bitching about him. I'm tired of her ass. I dont care if she my big sister or not.
"Look luh girl I don't kno who you think you talkin to but I'm grown your 16 and im 25 Fuck you thought. And you live in my house, and eat my goddamn food. So I advice you check ya attitude before you have to live with that bum ass nigga. Now get outa my face wit all dat." I walked past her and nudged her with my shoulder.
"Uhuh bitch you not finna nudge me and think that shiit gon slide." Ashton said while she grabbed handful of my hair. She started punching the living Hell outa me but i held back. I got her into a head lock and started beating dat ass.
"Hey hey hey stoppp." Keke came running down the stairs trying to break us up. That's our baby sister. I really wish she wasnt here to see us fighting. Ever since our parents left us to go do drugs and become street walkers she hasn't been the same. Shiit none of us have.
"Let me go Dori damn." Ashton said struggling to get out of my head lock. I wasn't having that shiit.
"Nahh man Fuck that. Ashton you always in my business. And you never listen to me and my problems. You always see the bad in what I do, so ima keep you in this head lock until you say you gon listen."
"Madori stop Bein petty and just let her go." Keke said. She grabbed my wrist and I instantly let go. I started rubbing them again. This pain was unbearable. My vision was getting blurry. I hated when Ashton saw me cry. I always felt defeat when it came to her stuck up ass.
"Dori let me see." Ashton said trying to grab my hand. I moved away from her and ran upstairs. I went to my room and layed on my bed. How the Fuck she gon be all tough and hard on me one minute then all soft and sincere on a nigga the next ?? These people and they emotions are too much to deal with. I thought to myself. School started in a few weeks and I needed to get myself together. I stayed in my room for the rest of the night and cried myself to sleep.
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General Fiction16 year old Madori felt like she was nothing on the south side of st.Louis but a Hoe. being used by her abusive thug 18 years old Quinn she felt like she wasn't supposed to be on this earth. she lost everything..... until one day Rayan a 17 year old...