Newsies : Undercover Newsie

The "situation"

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 As soon as the gang had entered the lodging house you could hear whoops and hollers from the newsies being rowdy as usual. Soon an old,wrinkly man stepped out from behind the counter who had a kind twinkle in his eyes .

"Well , your all back unusually late".

     He said and then looked at me amusingly.

"well who is this"?

     He asked as jack pushed me forward and I stumbled and tripped, again. Jack proudly said.

"This is dusty "!

      Half of the room snickered , while the old man laughed with his eyes lighting up with amusement , I blushed bright red and sent a glare in jacks direction. He just smirked and made thumbs up signs In my direction.

"Could he maybe stay here"?

Questioned jack.

"Sure,we have an extra bunk I think ...".

     Mumbled the person at the desk thinking to himself.

" Well, rent is five cents a week and the names Kloppman".

     Said the old man with such energy that I had not seen with people of his age.

"Deal"!

     I said enthusiastically. All the boys cheered and raced up the stairs screaming various phrases like.

 " Pokah, I bet you", and many more things lost in the sound of the wide range of voices.

     As I listened to this with a smile on my face I wondered what my mother and father would think, and my brother, they would definitely not approve, I could imagine them now. My breathing had started to become shaking and uneven and my knees felt really wobbly.

No ones pov
     Mush and jack were heading up the stairs , when jack saw dusty's face grow pale and his knees become wobbly. He raced back down the rickety stairs and supported lissys arms.

"Are you okay "?

     He asked her concern filling his voice.

"Yeah I'm ..."

      Said Lissy just as she tripped on a loose floorboard and fell right on top of jack !

Jacks pov
     I had no clue what had happened one minute I was standing up, the other I was lying down on the cold floor. I let out a low groan as I felt a dull ache in my legs .

      I tried to move but felt something warm and comfortable on me and immediately relaxed then I saw it was...DUSTY! He immediately jumped up and said an abrupt sorry!

      Which was cute...wait...did I really just think that ! This can not be happening ! But the warm feeling that had engulfed me before was not there as it had been with dusty. I came upon a decision, I had to avoid dusty for his sake and mine.

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