Mífndæ eba!!
[Hello everyone!!]
In the future, I will be combing through this entire book and editing it. I will make plenty of edits, some less noticeable than others. These edits will include:
1. Spelling mistakes.
2. Grammar mistakes.
3. Missing descriptors / Actions.
4. Realism mistakes.
But alongside these edits, I will do bigger edits that I call for help from my readers for! These edits will include:
1. Unrealistic scenes. (Sudden acts of prowess? Inhuman actions? Did Selene just climb a mountain like an energetic Viking?)
2. Out-of-Character moments. (Selene ignoring Argus' obvious stench AND Ullr waking up at the last moment? Yeah, nuh-uh. He's the literal god of the hunt.)
3. Eye-rolling levels of coincidence. (Selene protecting herself with a perfectly placed bow? Cool! Just a little bit of well-placed theft.)
The examples I provide were discovered by all your comments!! I would love to receive more so I can adjust parts of the story that don't fit. During this time, I am also taking recommendations about what you guys wanted or missed out on!
(This also includes bonus chapters! I love my bonus chapters.)
Not kinky enough sex? Need some more involved characters? Too short of chapters? Did the ending feel rushed? I'd love to hear all your thoughts!
Ngó ngeú,
[Thank you,]
Huldra Konungr
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THE TYRANT : UNVEIL THE MOON
WerewolfHe was gigantic. The 7'0 monster of a man towered over her, even though he was sitting. Bright cyan eyes gazed down at her unreadably. He gestured with his large fingers for her to come closer. She'd anxiously waddle up to him. His bare chest was o...
