Hi guys!! Please don't be mad, this is not an update. (I will try and update again tonight though!!) I would just like to open this page up to specific input or feedback that you have for me in this book. It can really be anything from suggestions to criticism to comments. I really want to know what you guys think!!
Some of the input I have gotten from people is the matter of why Sasuke and Orochimaru waited so long to attack Katsu and the others when they knew their location. The reason for this is because Orochimaru is so cruel that he wanted to give the others a false sense of security before intervening. Also I wanted to show that they are patient and may have been dealing with other matters during the seven month gap.
Another thing is the fact that Katsu wasn't very guilty about sort of kissing Sasuke back. Well, the thing with this is that Katsu barely began to kiss back before the kiss was broken. She was so flustered with the whole situation that she herself can't really comprehend what happened or what she was feeling.
But yeah guys, please please pleeeease let me know if you have any problems or questions or suggestions or what have you with the story! XD I want to know what YOU think and how I can improve it in the future. We got some good stuff ahead!!! Let's make it awesome!! I will update this occasionally so make sure you check it every now and then. Thanks so much guys!!!
-GoalieGirl
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I love how a bunch of you guys are trying to guess the villain family member of each of the three children: Erika, Hibiki, and Tamiko. Remember it can either be a villain parent of older sibling. XD Not one person has guessed all three fully correct though!! XDXDXD. I really hope that when you guys find out the truth, you won't be disappointed! :D Keep guessin'! XD
Hey again, guys! So my favorite ship name for Katsu and Kakashi so far is Katsushi XDXDXD. Does anyone have one for Katsu and Sasuke? XD *hides behind Naruto* I'm just asking!
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Unbreakable (Book 1) #Wattys2015
Fanfiction(A Naruto-themed fanfic- Book 1 in its series) Just recently promoted to Jonin Status as a medical shinobi of the Hidden Leaf Village, Katsu Inazuna is assigned to Squad Seven. Sakura Haruno, the squad's original ninja medic has departed the village...
