~ Chapter 12 ~ (sneak peek - submit your ideas!)

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"I'm sorry to interrupt, but there are too many of them." The fallen angel said, and I started to panic.

"Von-"

"Everything will be all right, Phoenix." Von said, and I started hyperventilating.

"I'm not ready! I can't even use the shadow method right!" I exclaimed, and Von rushed over to me, then hugged me, calming me down.

"I'll take care of it." Von said, then rushed out of the room with the fallen angel.

"We have to go." Kritanta said, making me jump and turn around.

"I'm not leaving without Von." I said, and she nodded.

"I know, and we won't." I followed Kritanta out the door, and saw the large amounts of panicking fallen angels and demons.

"I have to help them." I said. "The angel abilities come naturally, right?"

"Yes, but we need not for you to use your abilities just yet." Kritanta said, throwing me a cloak. "Put this on. It'll prevent us from drawing any unneeded attention." I pulled the cloak on, and followed Kritanta through the panicking crowd. Soon enough, we were outside, and Von was fighting off the opposing demons along with other demons and fallen angels. I froze, seeing Von get stabbed multiple times. "He'll be fine Phoenix." Kritanta said, and dragged me along with her, through the crowd of growling fallen angels. Kritanta created a tunnel, which we went through as fast as it closed.

"He was getting stabbed back there! Why couldn't I help?!" I asked. I had had enough training to fight off at least a few demons!

"You're not ready. Not yet." Kritanta said, as she pulled me down the tunnel.

"Well, that's not for you to decide!" I exclaimed and Kritanta looked at me with sympathy.

"You won't be able to fight them off as well as you could if we just waited a little longer." Kritanta explained, and I groaned.

"That's what you've been saying for weeks!" I groaned.

"I know, but just a little more time." Kritanta repeated.

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Sooooo, long time no chapter... I know. I'm the terrible awful. I'm thinking of trying to continue writing this book, but if I can't, then I'm going to hand it to one of you guys to continue writing. I'll let you know. But until then... Submit your ideas! I've been staring at this for months thinking of what to add to it, but I can't think of anything - and I think you guys will want another chapter. I have an idea for ending, but I don't know what to do for the remaining chapters. Would you guys care if this were a short book? It's all on you guys.

I would also like to thank all who votes, comments and reads. You guys are amazing, and every comment, read and vote makes me smile every day. The fact that I know someone actually takes interest in my busy thoughts written on the Internet makes me feel like I shouldn't give up on writing. I really appreciate and love all of you!
~ Tyler <3
P.S. Thanks for being so patient with me... :)

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