Sequel: Chapter 5

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DANNY'S POINT OF VIEW
I heard the buzzing noise stop and I looked at the monitor to see that Scott had his head drooped down. They guard, whose name I assumed was Joey, took the contraption off of Scott's head and rolled the machine out of the camera's view. A few seconds later he came back and began to smack Scott around a little bit and I saw his eyes flutter open, allowing me to let out a sigh of relief that I didn't notice I was holing in. "All good sir. Mr. Taylor is able to continue playing" Joey said clapping and again walking out of the camera's view. Nicky came over and stood in between Ashley and I and she patted our heads saying, "duck, duck, duck, goose." Her hand landed on Ashley's head and she laughed,
"Payback is a b*tch hun." She walked over to the list and turned back around, "Ashley, would you rather give your mom a zap or your boyfriend. Yes, Danny sitting right next to you." Nicky pressed the button on the timer and Ashley started to scream at her, "Come here you little b*tch. Let your bodyguards leave and let us solve this on our own!" She started to get up out of her chair, but the guard put a gun to her head and told her to sit down. "Babe please sit down, choose me. I can handle it babe, it is okay. Your mom can't handle it." I could hear her mom shouting to choose her and that she would be fine, but I think that we both knew that she wouldn't be. "Twenty seconds left Ashley" Nicky said just staring at the timer. "Babe it is ok, just press the button for me." Ashley looked at me, tears streaminf down her face, "I am so sorry baby" and she pressed the button for me. I leaned back in my chair and got ready. "It is okay baby. I love you always, no matter what." I saw Joey walk in the room and he put the head gear on me. "Joey please have Ashley press the button herself" Nicky said with a devioius smile planted on her face. "Are you crazy? There is no way that I am pressing that button!" Ashley shouted at her. The guard yet again put a gun to her head and said in his deep mono tone voice, " Press the button or I will blow your head into little pieces." I saw her take a deep breath and she looked at me her eyes letting tears freely fall down her face. "Baby do it please. Look away and just press the button. I will be okay." I see her nod her head and I brace myslef for the pain. I look back at her to see her hand quivering over the button. I reach my arm out and put her hand on the button, "Do it." I feel the shock waves rush all over my body and I feel myself sink down in my chair as my body moves backwards, fowards, and side to side. I black out for a couple of seconds, but then wake up to feel and see Ashely holding my hand. "I'm okay baby, I am okay. You see? I told you that I would be alright." She reached over to give me a hug, but she was pushed away by the guard again, "You may not touch the other players unless permitted to." I look down and got ready for whatever was about to come. "Alright Jake, we are going to give your family a break here, would you rather zap Ashley or Danny?"  My immediate reaction was to prevent him from choosing Ashley, but she was already screaming to zap her because I couldn't hanlde it another time. "Jake, dude. I am strong, I can do it" I said yelling over Ashley. "Danny, you can't take it again... I think that Ashley has to take it, but there is no way that I am going to zap her." I knew that I couldn't do it, but I knew that Ashley wouldn't be able to take the punishment. "Jake press the button for me right now, she can't handle it." I saw him nod his head and he pressed the button for me. Joey came over and pressed the button and yet again, all I saw was black.... but I couldn't open my eyes like last time no matter how hard I tried. Everything just went black and I saw a light flash like they happens when you die. I could hear everyhting that was going on, but I just couldn't move. Was it even possible to be paralyzed by being electricuted? I felt someone check my neck for a pulse, "He is alive sir, but just unresponsive." I heard Ashley start screaming and she started to tell me to wake up. With every time she said that, I could feel the feeling in my arms coming back, but I still couldn't move them. "Babe please wake up. You said that you would be fine. Come on babe, you can do this." I kept telling my brain to move my arm, but my finger moved instead. The more I moved that, the more sensation I had in my right arm. Soon I could move my right arm and my head. "I can't feel anything but my face and my right arm" I said grunting still trying to move. "What should I do with him, sir?" Jeffery took a seat. Well he can still talk and move and arm, so lets let him stay. In the mean time, lets start Round 2! This round we will be using the thumbsrew, an ancient torture device used to crush bones in your fingers. Your family will be tied in chairs for this round, motioning to the screen where a white gas started to spread throughout the room. After the smoke cleared, more men came in and tied everyone to chairs and put tape over their mouths. "Just leave them alone! Let us do this! They never did anything to you!" Jake screamed to Jeffery. "Joey we do not handle this behavior, please show Jake what happens when he does not follow directions." Joey nodded and asked who should be effected. Jeffery responded with a simple, "Surprise me!" and a chuckle. "Don't you dare touch any of them!" Jake screamed at Joey as he walked out of the room. "You know what, I think his mom would teach him a lesson." Joey soon appeared in the camera downstairs and walked over to Jake' mom. First he ripped the silver suct tape from her mouth, then he took out a blindfold from his jacket pocket and put it on. Joey was a heavy set old man with many larfe freckles covering his large oblong shaped head. He had stone cold blue eyes and his back was hunched over. From the time that the tape was ripped off of her mouth, allowing her to speak,  Jake's mother was screaming at the people down there and telling everyone how much that she loved them. The last thing that I heard her say before the gun shot was, "Jake this isn't your fault. Don't worry about what happens to me." He pulled a gun out and aimed it and shot, he took the blindfold off and assessed what damage he had down. Nancy was breathing heavily and her eyes nearly buldged out of her eye socket. "Sir I think that I may have hit her lung. She may not live to participate in the second round. What would you like me to do?" Jake leaped out of his chair and screamed at the top of his lungs, "You bast*rd! My mom better survive or you will regret it!" Jeffery just started to laugh, "What are you going to do, punch me? How there are guards everywhere and they will shoot you." Jake threw his chair back, "Go ahead and shoot me! I am already dead, we all are. We are never going to get out of this place! You aren't just going to let us go freely! You will keep us here until we are dead! Just get it over with already!" Then a voice spoke from the TV screen, "Sir Nancy is alive, but seriously injured. She can play, but she will not be able to take another serious injury. The entrance hole was centimeters away from her left lung." Jake's head snapped to the large screen as the camera zoomed in on her. Jake picked up his chair and sat down in it. " You are lucky that she is  alive you bast*rd. You would have been dead by now." This earned a laugh from Jeffery and he just cheerfully said, "Lets start round 2!"
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Hey Guys! I think that this is one of my quickest updates ever, but my last chapter got a lot of comments, so I updated sooner.

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