I'm going to start on rewriting things to be in the third person pov today and combining chapters together two Chapters at a time, but for now, enjoy this Chapter, I plan to try and make the rewrites a bit more descriptive, and hopefully more emotional if I can remember to do so, I also plan to change the love interest and I am planning to draw a brand new cover for the story too.
Recap:
"You better get moving quickly... We'll keep in touch, oh, and by the way, my name is Ollie, nice to meet you." Was the last thing the voice said before the line cut, leaving me alone again, well except Marie, who was still asleep thankfully, who knows when she last slept peacefully.
But now, it was time to carry one, I still hadn't found Poppy.
Looking around the area, there was a Kissy Missy statue that caused me to pause, unsure if this was similar to Huggy, colour was everywhere too, two blue columns, one of which was broken with metal stripes wired together in the middle, two red columns with yellow stripes.
the floor was full of white squares with red, blue and yellow squares scattered about, blue door ways with red lights inside and metal spinner barriers and a lemonade vending machine with Mommy Long Legs drinking some lemonade, and a Mommy Long Legs cut out.
I found a locked door with a yellow sign labelled Maintenance, so I moved to look around some more, there were toys scattered about, bloody and lifeless, wandering through the area, I found another door with another yellow sign labelled Security.
Thankfully this door was actually open, allowing through to a new room, filled with computer screens on an L shaped desk at the end, a shelf to the right with blue boxes, a lamp and a plant, which I couldn't even begin to explain how it's still alive after 10 years, maybe it's a succulent.
There were a few posters on the right too, with a mirror, the left had about eight file cabinets in two rows of four and drawers, and a board for information, and a fan on top of the cabinets, there were a few boxes with who knows what inside, and a computer monitor with a keyboard and mouse, a document and a pen pot.
Looking to the right, the shelves had been hiding a door next to them, so I walked through, finding a small corridor with another yellow door, so with it being the only way forward, I walked through to it.
I passed yellow pipes on both sides and the right of the wall had a hole in the bricks behind one of the pipes, but I carried on through the door, making it to the Maintenance room.
In the middle of the room was a weird contraption, a pole with a ring of three handles on the top and a what looked like a sign with a hand on it, what the hell where these people making?
Looking around the room with confusion, I saw a few more shelves with random bits on them and a few boxes and barrels in the floor, so out of curiosity and confusion, I used the grab pack to spin the contraption around, finding a light that hit a power hatch on the wall, giving me a better idea of what to do, using the blue hand, I pressed on the circle power conductor and put the green hand through the sign to hit the hatch, which opened the door.
Going through, I was back at the train station area with the crashed train, realising the red lights were now green, the power now working for me to get through, and walk up more stairs and Marie continued to sleep.
The top of the stairs had so many fake plants, and a KickinChicken cut out in front of an area called Elliot's Express, to the left a Candy Cat and Lemonade vending machine side by side.
The cut out introduced KickinChicken, asking to go outside, the messages only get more disturbing from there before it ended in screaming, why were all of these cut outs insanely disturbing?
I left the cut out to go towards the tram, it didn't seem powered, so I walked around the walkway, looking at the paintings on the wall of all the different characters and posters, before I found and pulled a big red lever and went back to check the other side of the tram, finding another big red lever to pull.
This one had large scratch marks in the wall around it, despite the uneasy feeling, I pulled the lever down, activating the tram's power and allowing me to enter it.
Was I getting closer? Is this place just going to go on forever? How big did they make the factory? Where is Poppy?
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Stuck In The Factory
FanfictionFeather Payne goes into the back into factory after quitting a while ago, in search of her missing wife and an explanation for the note she received, she finds the factory abandoned other than a life sized Huggy Wuggy doll and some signs for other t...
