who adopted me (1D fanfic)

theyre here

louis pov 

we arived at the care home at 1.30 as we pulled up infrount of it we saw a massive house with many windows it looked old i just hoped the inside was alot better. we all stepped up to the door and i knocked on it a middle aged lady opend the door and said "hello im jan and welcom are you here to visit or adopt" we all at the same time said adopt she smiled and told us to follow her. as we walked into the place we could here lots of little children playing and laughing they sounded happy. the walls where a creem colour and had pictures the kids had drawn. she asked us what age group and if we wanted a girl or boy. we had alreddy agreed that we wanted a girl between the ages of 10 to 15. we enterd a big room that had 2 chairs and a few toys scatterd around jan started yelling out names of girls in the age group they where to stay and the rest all walked out they didnt look to upset but one small girl looked up at me and said bye bye mr in a small squeekey voice she was so sweet.

harry pov 

we walked into a big room full of children they all looked so happy then jan lined all the girls within the age range there where only 7 girls they where all in their best clothes i walked up to the first girl she was a small long blond haired girl her name was sally she smiled sweetly and said "hi im sally adopt me because im beautiful and im the best in this place" i looked towards the boys and frowend i didnt like this girl on bit she was stuck up and fake. the next girl was called trudy she was around 4 of her friends hally beth maisy and anna  they where laughing with each other but when they saw us walk over to them they all did a massive fan girl screem it was so loud jan turned round shouted and sent them to their rooms so they could calm down. then i looked across to see nialler talking to a small black haird girl she was wearing a pair of black jeans and a gray top she looked shy. 

nial pov 

i walked up to the last girl she was short with black hair she was shy i bent down and said "hello im nial who are you" she looked at me with her  wide blue eyes she looked petrified then she mumbled "hhhiiii iiimmm  alice" she was so cute even tho she wasnt in her best clothes i looked over to the other boys and smiled i just knew she was the one. then somthing wird happend jan walked over grabbed alices wrist and shouted "dont you dare talk to our guests you horrid girl go to your room right now" alice quickley turned and sprinted upstairs then jan turned around and said "im so sorry you had to witness that she is a horrid troubbled girl who has a big atatude problem i hope she didnt put you off the others"  i then went over to the others and said i like alice the others agreed as she looked so sad they wanted to help make her happy and get her away from this awful place so we had decided now all we have to do is tell jan.

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i know i only just wrote a chapter but i got bord so hope you enjoy and comment your opinions and idears