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Review Of: The Club.

The Club. By Katrina123

Introduction: 10

The way you introduced it was very good. The fact that you used the senses and described the surroundings, it made a very intriguing opening. I really enjoyed the fact that it wasn’t basic everything that you described had something attached to it to create a purpose as to why it was being described. You were very clear and concise and it made perfect sense, it drew me in and made me read more. There’s not much I can pick out in a bad light because there is nothing ‘bad’ about it. If I did that it’d simply be like me trying to pick a needle out of a haystack, unnecessary and unneeded.

Characters: 8

You gave some reference to appearance and reference to behavior and personality traits of some of them, however there wasn’t much to go on which left quite a bit up to the imagination, usually I wouldn’t give such a high score but the reasoning behind why I have is because it fits in with the way you introduced the readers into the story, not giving too much away. Usually if you’re going to tell us about a character you have to tell us some details and you did, you gave enough for the characters to develop.

Plot: 10

Very mysterious, I haven’t seen anything like it and it seems very intriguing. I can’t wait to see where you take it. As mentioned before in previous reviews, I don’t read the blurb I purely go by what is written in your first chapter and it was enough to get me questioning what’s going to happen next. It’s unique and well thought out – just make sure it stays that way.

Grammar: 8

Nothing really wrong with the grammar just be sure to check over it as there were some mistakes but other than that none too bad to pick out. 

Page Turner: 9

I’ll be keeping up to date with this story for sure. I really enjoyed reading and writing about this chapter and I hope you continue with the same techniques you have in this first chapter. I will be turning the page.

Total: 45 – Bookmark/Add to your reading list

W.A.B