Being a Rockstar Sucks 40

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Thanks so much for your patience, the suspense mustve sucked. Hey, atleast now i upload every week and that will probably turn to every three of four days x3

I wrote Blackhole all by myself and I'm hoping its good, im not sure if it will be in this chapter yet tho

This chapter is dediacted to DiNozo fro helping me edit my stories. Oh and sorry that there hasn been a lot of Jace Povs lately; I just think you can understand the story better by doing the Serenity Pov during the gigs and stuff. Also Serenity does do a little screamo as well.

iLikeFlowers made the banner ^_^

Now the chap!

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***Chapter 40***

+++Serenity's Pov+++

My dad approached me a stern look on his face it almost made him look his actual age of thirty eight, instead of always looking like he is in his early twenties. I took a deep breath and sent Jace a warning look, to not act like an idiot in front of my dad. Jace pouted but nodded. I swallowed and looked back to my parents; my mom was bouncing off her feet, her and Liz were very alike. I turned to see LIz in a serious converstaion with her parents. I could just hope my dad would agree with the career and letting me stay for a while longer.

"So how was it?" I asked again, my nerves bouncing off the walls. My mom jumped at me, literally. She hugged me tightly and patted my head as if I was a puppy. I scowled as I saw Jace trying to hold in his laughter.

"It was amazing Serenity!" She cheered and  I smiled brightly.

"Thanks mom." I said and and she laughed.

"No problem, you know its my obligation to make you feel good about yourself." She teased and I laughed dryly.

"Oh I feel the love." I said saracastically; I got my humor from her and my talent from my dad.

"Im just kidding, you were great. The songs were beautiful." She praised, before giving my dad a warning look and pushing him in front of me." Your dad thought so too, right Adrien?" My mom sent dad a warning look similar to the one i sent Jace.

"Honestly, what did you think?" I asked my dad and he frowned.

"Do you want the truth?" He asked and I nodded hesitantly. He took in a breath and let it out.

"Well it was awful." He said sadly and shook his head; my heart clenched and a lump grew in my throat. I couldnt believe it was bad, we tried so hard. How? I saw tears blurring my vision, my dad's face had the expression of fear as he shook his hands wildly around."Hey kiddo! I'm just kidding! It was spetacular!" He exclaimed and I looked at him in confusion.

"You said it was awful." I accused and he shook his head.

"I was just messing with you to see your reaction. I didnt think you would almost cry, jeez." He replied and I glared at him. "Sorry." He muttered.

"Uh huh, now whats the real review?" I asked knowing he had much more to say, he smiled sheepishly.

"You know me well. Ok well overall it was great, there were a few drawbacks but nothing big. All of it can be fixed." He scratched his chin and I nodded for him to continue." Well I start with you, youre voice flows very smoothly. You had a subtle use of vocal harmony, varying tempo , that demanded instrumental writing. In other words your voice was eccentric. However, add more emotion to it, sometimes it became voidless of feelings. I loved the electric guitar riffs from both you and Liz, adn your voice was very aggressive that left and impression. So you were good. Liz, how I said was very good with the guitar, only that maybe she shouldnt jump a lot, she messed up a note or two I believe. Sky was great! Where did you find him? Anyway his playing was very rhythmitic and prominent." Sky nodded in thanks a smile on his face, I was glad that I didnt make any huge mistakes. I let out a sigh of relief, I couldnt believe my dad, Rockstar legend, thought we were amazing." Oh and Zoit. You had superb bass playing, however your screams were slightly girly at some parts." I instantly bursed out laughing; I cant beleive, Zelliot who was in a famous band, got a bad review. Zelliot's jaw dropped and his fake black eyebrows shot up.

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