important question (pls read)

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HI CUTIES IM GOING TO WRITE IN CAPS BECAUSE IM A LITTLE BIT MAD BUT I WAS TOLD TO ACCEPT CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM SO IM GONNA STICK MY ANXIETY UP MY ASS WHOS READY TO ROCK

1) IS THIS STORY MOVING TOO SLOW? IS THERE SOMETHING WRONG WITH THE 'MOMENTUM'?

GIVE YOUR HONEST OPINION BECAUSE IF EVERYONE FEELS THIS WAY, THEN ILL TRY TO FIX WHAT IM DOING WRONG OR EDIT OR SOMETHING. IS THIS NOT WHAT YOU EXPECTED TO HAPPEN??

(break it to me lightly im a fragile bug)

YEAH SO I LOVE YOU BYE I HOPE YOU HAVE A GOOD DAY OR NIGHT OR AFTERNOON

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