SCORES AND INITIAL OPINIONS
By order of district and gender
DISTRICT 1 MALE - DANELIEUX LEON
Tender: 11
Odysseus: Danelieux, I was impressed by your entry overall, and your description on Night was adorable. But, there were some mistakes in your writing that I couldn't overlook. 10.5
Total Score: 10.75
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DISTRICT 4 MALE - CORRADHIN COLE
Tender: 10.75
Odysseus: Corradhin, poor, poor, Corradhin, could you have broken my heart any worse? This was everything I hoped it would be and more. There's really not much more I can say. 11
Total Score: 10.85
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DISTRICT 7 MALE - REED QUILLEAROY
Tender: 10.25
Odysseus: I can tell that you were feeling pressed for time writing this. This was my favorite match-up, and while your descriptions of James were terrifying, it all felt too...rushed. 10.4
Total Score: 10.3
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DISTRICT 2 FEMALE - AMEILA MONTAIGNE
Tender: 11
Odysseus: Amelia, my sweet, you never cease to impress me. This has been, by far, my favorite entry from you. Your portrayal of Ebony was brilliant and thrilling. I was terrified by your descriptions and gagged at that hair. I did notice, however, that you're shirtless once more. 11.5
Total Score: 11.25
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DISTRICT 4 FEMALE - AMANI ALURAI
Tender: 10
Odysseus: Beautifully done. Absolutely beautiful. You really have a way with words. However, your entry was the shortest out of all of them. And that, to me, was kind of disappointing. I feel like someone as good as making this gruesome experience so poetic should be capable of delivering lots of the nitty-gritty details. 10
Total Score: 10
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DISTRICT 6 FEMALE - NERI RAVENNA
Tender: 10.5
Odysseus: This was one of my favorite entries, by far. I liked Neri's panic, and her desperation to know just how something like this was pulled off. My biggest pet-peeve, I think, would have to be that the entry was that there were a lot of longer sentences, which made the entry feel much shorter than it really was. That took a lot away from the fast-paced aspect I was looking for. 10.5
Total Score: 10.5
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