Name: Sofia de Long
I like it. Sofia-wisdom Sofia- daughter of Athena...
Age: 13
ok
Godly Parent: Athena
there are other gods/goddesses too you know.... but if you must...
Legacy/Blessing: -
nothing? simple. ok. cool.
Greek/Roman: Greek
CHBBBBBBB
Weapon Of Choice: Dagger
most people say this... but whatever
Appearance: blond hair, gray eyes, tallish
typical... more detail please?
Clothes: Orange CHB tank top, dark wash short shorts, paint splatter nikes
I like this... it's original NO MORE MARY SUE
Personality: Fun, sassy, sweet, smart,
WHOA WHOA WHOA MARY SUE ALERT I EXPECTED MORE OF YOU
kind of shy at first but when she's comfortable she's crazy
Better...
Fatal Flaw: Pride
ok
Fav Camp Activity: capture the flag
typical but whatever
Likes: cats, anime, reading, music, art, sports, pineapple pizza
good.
Dislikes: bullies,
CLICHÉ
sitting still, pink fluffy frilly stuff,
me likey
movies that aren't like the book, people bugging her while she's reading or listening to music
amen
Bio: (optional) -
Other: -
Results~
Mary Sue Scale: 46%
Pork Chop: 21%
Originality: 53%
Sentence:
HELLO Athena girl! Just use some creativity (daughter of crafts after all) and make it more original!
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