Is YOUR OC a MARY SUE??/Story Reviews

Creepypasta Form/Example

So, here's my Creepypasta OC form.

NAME:

CP NAME:

SAYiNG:

BiO:

FATHER:

MOTHER:

OTHER FAMiLY:

LOOKS:

CLOTHES:

BiRTHDAY:

WEAPON:

WEAKNESSES:

LiKES:

DiSLiKES:

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NAME: Raven Taylor

CP NAME: Dark Archer (Dark Charmer maybe, haven't decided)

SAYiNG: "You've had your heart pierced by Cupid's arrow... but what about mine?"

BiO: Parents died when she was a 5. (I know, cliché I wanted them alive, but the story works better if she's Ina foster home) lived in an orphanage-foster home thing. they treated her bad, like a maid. one day, she was cleaning and found the necklace. she put it on and the goddess of dark magic, Hecate, was summoned. she began to teach her simple magic, and then more advanced. now she doesn't use spells much, and typically twists the Dark Mist.

FATHER: Jason Taylor

MOTHER: Helena Taylor

OTHER FAMiLY: None

LOOKS: Brown and blond
sunstreaked hair, purple-I know- purple eyes (glow when uses powers) about 5' 6" fairly tan skin
CLOTHES: darkwash skinny jeans (shorts during summer), dark purple cami under a black crop top "that seemed to be woven from pure Night herself" (not my quote don't judge), dark purple flats, and black driver gloves. Silver necklace on a chain that hangs about halfway down her torso. has the symbol of Hecate on it. (more on it later)

BiRTHDAY: April 1st

WEAPON: Powers. usually, she twists the Dark Mist into a bow and arrow. the Dark Mist is like regular Mist in the hands of anyone but her. the dark arrow solidifies as it leaves her bow. if bow and arrow isn't the best voice combat weapon, she twists the Dark Mist into whatever is best.
POWERS: Magic, can manipulate like the Dark Mist. it's like Mist, but it's not... it can be created by a spell, or summoned if there is some available in the world.She found a  Magic necklace of Hecate which giver her her powers.

WEAKNESSES: Pride, you could say thinking she can do things she actually can't, not thinking enough before she does things, probably some more...

LiKES: Ooh. cats, swimming/other sports, being lazy, having fun, reading, music, dessert, again a lot of other things... (no I didn't forget... why'd u say that..)

DiSLiKES: um. redheads(Ancient Greek myth about redheads turning into vamps-her rivals), male chauvinist pigs, stomach aches, green beans, (AGAiN i DiDNT FORGET...........)