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inlovewithsnow2002~Snow Smith: Percy Jackson OC

Full Name- Serina Adriana Samantha Smith (SASS!!)
Me likeyy #originality ftw
Nickname- Snow (she like Percy hates being called by her real name)
alright I'm still liking this
Why the Nickname- She was born on the day of the first snow of the year and her hair is pure white
nice OMG LUV IT SO FAR DONT DISAPPOINT ME!

Godly Parent- Eris goddess of chaos and discord
YASSSS

Appearance- White hair, 5'9, Brown eyes,Graceful ballerina figure (she doesn't know why she has that she has two left feet)
LOL GUD
Always wears some kind of decorative head band ( cat ears , reindeer antlers, etc) Has literally no fashion type (seriously one day she dressed clad in all black with ripped jeans the next she is wearing only pink and after that its a daisy dress) PLEASE YOURE SO ORIGINAL IT HURTS
Dark brown skin (in other words she is black)

Sexuality- Pansexual
KAY THEN

Fatal Flaw- Trust (as in she is to trusting)
thank you

Birthday- December 12
kk
Best Friends- Nico Di Angelo, Will Solace, Travis and Connor Stoll, Drew Tanaka, and Ryan McCourt
CANON CHARACTERS AAHHH
*sigh* I would try to stay away from canon characters but if you must...
Crush/ boyfriend/ girlfriend- She'll never tell
heheheheh

Fears- being abandoned, seeing her own blood, and butterflies
BUTTERFLIES

OKAY THEN

I'm impressed man.
Pets- a Chinchilla named Amelia
:)))))))

Personality- Funny and quirky loves almost everything from skulls and cemeteries to daisies and rainbows . She has weird quirky habits and prides herself in being strange. She loves to have fun and party and while being extremely social she doesn't have many close friends and has a lot of enemies because she has almost no filter on what she says. Extremely blunt but very intelligent even if she doesn't always think before she talks or acts. She aspires to be a writer one day and wants to make a name for herself in the world . She excepts everyone for who they are and prides herself and others in keeping promises. If you break a promise with her its painful for you. She despises her birthday very very much believing it to be cursed and has panic attacks at the sight of her own blood though other people's blood doesn't bother her. While often seeming to always be playing she can be serious when wanted to and often suffers from anger mood swings. She cannot stand the thought of her friends leaving her and will often snap if in a bad mood pointing out problems in her friends though she loves them all the same. She is actually very touchy feely and loves to give surprise hugs and kiss people on the cheek. Her mortal parents inspired a love of music and art in to her and now she always has a song in her head. She carries her iPod everywhere and doesn't care if monsters attack her because she will never part with that thing. She has a special charm necklace that has a bunch of different charms on it that she can never part with because it was a birthday present from her brother. She loves to cook and food equally and loves to draw even if she is completely awful at it. She is a complete and uder fangirl and knows a lot about her favorite animes and her OTP is Solangelo also she has hidden cameras set up everywhere she goes and no one can figure out how she does it (seriously there everywhere) and blackmails people a lot which is the reason she has so many enemies.
OMG
OMG
I LOVE YOU
Weapons - a bow staff, a bladed fan, and a dagger for close combat she can't use a sword or spear to save her life she is also a high ranking belt in many forms of martial arts including judo, taekwondo, karate, and mixed martial arts.
AHHH THE ORIGINALITY
Powers- she has a gift for causing mischief , pitch black retractable wings like her mother and the ability to get inside a persons head though the process causes her a lot of pain and she often experiences hallucinations of the person's painful memories while doing so she also has a never ending backpack that she tricked out (seriously you can climb in and live there it is awesome)
OK the backpack may be stretching it but everything else is gud

Background- She appeared at her father's door step in a pitch black basket on the first snowfall of the year. Her father named her Serina and she was nicknamed snowflake which eventually shortened to snow because of the little strip of white hair on her head. Her father Clarence Smith was a photographer of wildlife and nature and would often travel around the world. When she was 2 her father got married to another woman by the name of Isis Robin who was a rather famous artist.Isis already had a son and named Matthew and Serina and him became best friends. Matthew was about three years older than her and when he was 7 and it was Serina's 4 birthday he got her a charm necklace. The two had a favorite game which was playing cops and robbers with fake guns. On that day Matthew was a robber and Serina was a cop and Serina had accidentally picked up a real gun, so when she went to "fake shoot" her brother things got a little messy. After the death of her brother Serina would have constant nightmares. Eventually she moved out to go with her father when he was working. She explored many places with her father and fell in love with the natural part of Earth. When Serina was nine she was sent back to the states to stay with her step mother. Her father felt she deserved a normal education along with the fact her step mother had sold the old house hoping this would stop her nightmares. She was sent to Westover Hall where she met and became best friends with Nico Di Angelo, and good friends with Drew Tanaka and Ryan McCourt. They promised never to leave her side.
canon characters... I would stay away but ok. otherwise YOURE MY NEW BEST FRIEND OMGS

About a month before her birthday she was kidnapped by someone and tortured. Not severely but enough to leave mental and physical scars and a fear of blood. The day Nico disappeared was her birthday and the worst day of her life. Not only did her best friend disappear but she got a phone call saying her father was rushing home to meet her and give her a present for her birthday a driver smashed in to his car. The collision was head on and he died on impact. That was the night of her 10th birthday.From that day on she was plagued with nightmares once more and slowly her friends disappeared right before her eyes. Both Ryan and Drew were pulled out of the school 3 weeks after her fathers accident and without her friends with her bullies constantly taunted and teased and harassed her. She made one new friend named Andreanna Peters. She helped her get over the death of her father and loss of her friends. Then on the day of her 11th birthday she was kidnapped once more by her supposed best friend's father. Apparently Andreanna's friendship was a ruse to gain her. Long story short sh escaped two weeks later and her nightmares intensified. After that she finished the school year and on the day of her 13 birthday she got three gifts. One a letter from her father, two a set of fans, and three a backpack. On that day a lion with golden fur burst through door. Her step mother pushed her out the way and the lion bit her. She told Serina to hide and she did. She watched from her hiding place as her only mother figure was eaten alive. The lion sniffed her out once more and she ran away. When she finally reached camp a boy in black killed the lion that had been chasing her for a year.
*cries in corner* that is good! the feels make it real and suspenseful and exciting.

Quote- My weirdness is my awesomeness in disguise
lolz

RESULTS:
Mary Sue scale: 0%
Pork Chop: 2%
Originality: 110%

Sentence: AMAZEBALLS!

now go kiss Ryan McCourt I ship it