Title: A Secret Past
I like it. mysterious. makes me wanna read.
Genre: Fanfic (Percy Jackson)
Percyyyy
Cover:
I think I like it. Maybe put words on it though? cuz otherwise it's just like oh it's a pic of a forest yay. not.
Description: Percy wasn't always Percy, and he (is he even a he?) um ok
had to change. He didn't want to but he had to for his own safety. ... not the heroic Percy I know. What if the Greeks find out about Percy's past and what he was trying to hide from and prevent what has finally caught up with him? idk what if?
First Chapter: The Dream
I think I like it. but the land of nyx? that's Tartarus, the Mansion of Night. why don't you just say nyx or the realm of nyx or something. this makes me want to read this book
Second Chapter: New Girl
oh so Percy and Annabeth aren't dating? no Percabeth?? *just wanna say u might wanna edit your book for grammar and such cuz I see a lot of mistakes*
Third Chapter: First What?
again, grammar. it kind of makes it confusing when there's a lot of mitsakes
lolz
I like the use of new monsters, like not the standard oh no it's medusa and hellhounds, and the girl is just like whoa I wanna know more. I like this.
OMG DiAMOND
Write more now I command you.
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