Tris Pedrad

Zekes initiation

    Tris p.o.v

    Dad looks at us and beckons us to come to him. We both run up to him on the stage. Me, I'm not shy to stand in front of the whole city. But Uriah is, he hides behind me slightly. I chuckle at him and so does dad. Zeke all the sudden bursts through the door glaring at me and uri with such intensity. If he didn't have pink hair I'd probably be scared.

"URI AND TRIS GET OVER HERE NOW" he screams. His pink hair and perfect drawings on his face that have slightly faded. At least he got the...uh thing off his forehead.

  Uriah and I high five, satisfied at our handy work. The people of the Dauntless desperately try to hid their giggles. While the rest of the factions weren't so amused. Max, our dad, laughs, "These three are legends in the dauntless youth, Zeke, Uriah and Tris. My fearless and brainless children."

  Zeke smiles and Uriah and I say 'sup'. My dad continues, "I recommend not messing with these three they can all put you in the hospital in .5 seconds."

"Doubt it," says a scrawny boy from erudite. He has blonde gelled hair and looks like he has to ask his mom to open his peanut-butter jar. 

"Oh yeah?" I say smirking ready for the challenge. I'm going to rip this little boys head off.

"Yeah!" he says in a try-to-be menacing tone. I'm sorry, but who was he trying to scare with such a puny angry voice? My dead dog?

"Well come up here I'll show you," I say still smirking. I'm ready to kick some scrawny boy ass. Dad, Zeke, and Uriah give the erudite boy a sympathetic look.  Uriah almost looks like he wants to step in, but he stops himself and just smiles at me in anticipation.

  "Dude... your dead," the three say in sync like the scary twins from the shining. The boy starts to look a little scared for challenging me. My fathers words must have finally made him realize what he was up against.  That he was in trouble.

Dad asked the boy, "What's your name?" Probably wondering what to call him when he pronounces him dead. The boy stares long and hard hard at us.

"Eric," the boy finally mutters.

"Well Eric I hope you had a nice life," My Dad replies shortly. The rest of the initiation room is just watching us. I still have my smirk plastered across my face. Eric comes to the stage running at me, I jump doing back hand springs across the choosing ceremony bowls. Then I dismount and kick Eric in the face. He tries to get up but I slam onto his back knocking him down and I grab his shoulders and slam his face into the ceremony bowls. He falls unconscious on the ceremony floor. I hear a few screams of horror, pansies.

  "I won!" I yell in victory. Zeke and Uriah rush over and exam me for wounds. Protective brothers, geez, Am I right?

"I'm fine" I say laughing. Then the three of us hunch over laughing. We straighten up and smile.

"Well you see why she's high up in dauntless," Dads laughter booms around the room.

"Any other takers," I chirp happily. Then my brothers, dad , and all of dauntless burst into hysterically laughter. I almost fall to the floor laughing. When my laughter subsides, I look up and catch the wicked glance from someone I hoped I'd never see ever again.

Well that's the end of the 2 chapter make sure you read shelly_tude s book. Called It's 'tris pedrad : dauntless born. It's a great book!!!!!🌈