3- The Mary Sue

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Mary sue (aka the nerdy Main character or generally the main character in any crappy clichè book). Mary Sue is the epitome of perfection. She has no flaws that ever annoy her close ones. If she does, it's not even a flaw, it's kawaii. Everyone loves her, everyone. Anyone who dislikes her is simply jealous of her. She has the perfect mixture of sarcasm, sweetness, cuteness, modesty, weirdness and craziness (But Only the cute type of weird and crazy), loving but can be bitter when she wants to (of course). Just the little ray of sunshine that probably poops rainbows and lives in Lala land.

If the protagonist of your book is a Mary Sue, she is pointless. No one will relate to her, she has no real problems. If the love interest of your MC is the male version of the Mary Sue... I don't even know what's worse. People forget that even in fantasy and fiction you should have realism, even if not completely, a sufficient amount. Your stupid Mary Sue character is just annoying to many. Anything she does is better than anyone else and she's just this Goddess. It makes it seem like she lives in a world made by her preteen self. Just... just stop with these perfect little princesses already.

In a book I read, the MC was fluent in ten languages, could do nearly the same amount of dance styles, amazing at singing, had excellent grades, was extremely beautiful, and pretty much everyone loved her. (Except a bitch but yeah the MC put the bitch, who was jealous of her, in her place).

This whole thing is ridiculous. Your stupid Mary Sue character isn't human, so don't create one. Because your creation seems extremely fake and contributes nothing to the character. Yes, I'm offensive. Yes, I don't care.

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Tell me if I missed something. Thanks for reading. These outros are really abrupt but I just suck at this stuff so... bye?

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