Partners in Crime

Second chances

James:*turns to DBA* what if we said that we could help you?
DBA: how could you help? *wipes eyes* *under breath so James and Reggie can't hear* why do I have to tear up now?...
Reggie: we may know where she is..
DBA: how could you know that?! Unless... *swims backwards* no no noooo!!!!! You took her?! *floats down onto a rock in shock*
James: Reggie head back and try and help her before... Well you know...
Reggie: yeah... Thanks and hurry *swims off*
James:*turns to DBA* hey um we need to get going I'll explain on the way...
DBA:*whips head toward him and glares* *swims past him* then let's go
James: coming.. *sighs* *catches up and grabs DBA's hand*
DBA:*glares* what are you doing?!
James: sorry... Its just we'll be there faster since I have a tail...
DBA:*glares at him* fine and if you take me to the wrong place so help me I'll... *looks straight ahead*
James: ok... Hey how come you didn't like say anything or give a reaction when you saw me and Reggie with tails?
DBA: we are underwater I expected it... That's why
James: yeah but your underwater and don't have a tail... *sees DBA smile a bit*
DBA: stop that I'm mad at you don't make me laugh *reaches across to punch him lightly in the arm*
James:*laughs* fight me
DBA: later I sooo will especially after I hear this story of why I should trust you
James:*winces* I guess I deserve that...
DBA: a little but well its just weird... I still trust you.. I'm... you didn't lie to me like others have or even make excuses or even try to! I trust and it makes no sense...
James: it makes sense... Others may not but I do... It's your spidy senses kicking in... *smiles*
DBA: I don't have spidy senses *sees James about to intercept* but... I do believe in second chances.... *small smile* I do want to be better friends your fun but right now you need to get me to LSS..
James: right *speeds up* do you want me to tell you about your umm... Sister...
DBA: yes I do and she isn't my sister but we've known each other forever and been through everything together so she is basically my sister...
James: oh ok.. The gist is LSS was looking for you and Reggie grabbed her with some seaweed like a lasso and pulled her down and well I knocked her out.... *winces at the memory and looks over at DBA for a response and shocked by the look a look of sympathy* why are you looking at me like that...
DBA: well your sorry and also you need to worry about what LSS will say, well do technically, she's worse than I am. *weak smile* and at least your trying to help me fix what you did. *clears throat* are we almost there?
James: yeah...
DBA: why did you do it?
James: do what? Oh kidnap LSS and sorta distract you..?
DBA: yeah that....
James: my boss...
DBA: who?
James: you've probably heard of her she's... *stops and whispers* we're here...
DBA:*looks around then forward* oh. my. snitnals. *whips to look at James* you and Reggie work for her?!

How'd I do?!!! Is it suspenseful???! Figure out who the stranger/boss is?!