Fourtris Fanfiction

Chapter 3: end of the world

Chapter 3: end of the world

"What do you need?" I opened the door expecting to find Christina or Zeke there but instead stood Uriah.

"Aye did the happy couple make love to each other?" he greets us smirking, then walks in uninvited.

"Uh no...." I look over at Tris and wink as she giggles.

"Sure..... look guys I came to tell you some bad news." My smile immediately faltered when he said this and i felt Tris suddenly gripping my hand.

"What could that possibly mean?" Tris said in a barely audible whisper.

"I uh.... Tris I saw your dad and brother walking around by the pit... just thought i should let you know." i felt Tris tense beside me and take in a deep breath.

"I-I-I...." She trailed off and then collapsed, yanking my hand down with her. I immediately knelt down to scoop her limp body into my arms. Uriah stood there staring at me dumbfounded.

"What are you doing?" I yelled at him, "run ahead and tell them what happened!!!"

"Oh..Uh ok." He took off running down the hall and i follwed at a slower much more careful pace. i was almost at the infirmary when a large man and a scrawny boy stopped me.

"what the hell man! can't you see i am trying to take care of a prob-" I stopped mid-sentence when i looked up to find Mr. and Caleb Prior.

"WHAT THE HELL DID YOU DO TO MY DAUGHTER?!?!?!??!?!?!"

"look man! i didn't do anything! She passed out when she heard you were here and now i am trying to save her! so if you don't mind, i am going to get her to the infirmary so she doesn't die!!!!"

"Then why don't you have a shirt on?" He said with a grin so smug i wanted to slap it right off his face.

"Because we were sleeping."

"Together? As in dreaming or as in...."

"Dreaming! NOW MOVE!!!!!!" I pushed my way passed him and ran the last couple of yards to the infirmary. I ran in, dropped to my knees and felt like passing out myself. A couple of doctors swamped us, grabbing Tris from my arms and helping to my feet where I was brought over, put into a chair and handed a glass of water.

"FOUR!! Four oh my gosh! What happened? Is Tris all right? Wheres your shirt?" Christina rushed in with several others as i was bombarded with questions.

"I uh.... Tris passed out, i ran here... i can't explain my shirt." I sighed and realized tears were beginning to drip down my face. I wiped them off quickly hoping no one noticed, but of course they did. Zeke whispered something to Christina and she nodded then walked away.

"Hey man its ok... Trissy is a strong girl she'll be fine." Uriah sat next to me and put an arm around me. I shook my head and struggled to form words.

"I was going to propose to her later tonight! And now I won't even get the chance." My face became wet with tears once more and this time I didn't try to hide it. Uriah, Zeke, and Will stood there dumbfounded unsure of what to do. They knew I'd boughten a ring but I never told them when I planned to do it.

The doctor walked out with a grim expression on his face.

"You the boyfriend?" he asks grimly.

"Yes, listen is there anyway you could hold off telling her family until I get a few minutes or so alone with her?" I ask hopeful.

"Where's her family live?"

"Abegnation, brother is Erudite."

"Yes we can do that but listen..." He looked down at his papers "Tris is in an unresponsive state called a coma and it isn't clear when or if she will wake up." And that was when I lost it. Anything and everything inside of me snapped and I rushed out of the lobby out to kill. I ran out into the pit looking for the one and only Mr. Prior. He was sitting on the ground, he looked up when he saw me. I noticed he was teary eyed but I could care less.

"She hates me doesn't she?" he says weakly. I didn't care, I couldn't give this man one ounce of sympathy. I started repeatedly punching him in the face, over and over and over again.By the time someone yanked me off of him, his face was bleeding and he was breathing heavily. Uriah dragged me to the bunks and told me to take a breather. I shook my head several times before saying:

"He did this! He's the reason she isn't in my arms right now! he's the reason we aren't engaged.... And she isn't kissing me." I say my voice cracking, the tears started dripping down my face again and this time I couldn't stop them. I was shaking violently and was struggling to not just jump off the chasm. Suddenly the doors burst open and a happy Christina yells, "Tris just woke up, she's asking for you, the doctors say you can see her for a few minutes"

"Your not joking?!?" I said with my instructor four face that used to scare her. "No, she's really awake!" she exclaims happily. I sprint towards the infirmary and make my way to Tris's room. The ring box in my pocket I burst into her room and saw her brother laughing with her. My face fell when I saw him.

"Why are you here?"I growl angrily.

"I can't visit my little sister?" he says sarcastically.

"YOU'RE THE REASON SHE'S HERE IN THE FIRST PLACE" I yell going ballistic.

"Oh.... Um yea... I guess I will leave.See you later Tris."

"I'm so so sorry, Tris, I'm just protective of you because your the love of my life and I couldn't even bear living without you" I gush nervously. Her cheeks went red with embarrassment.

"Four where's your shirt?"she asks curiously

"....... I can't really explain that."

"I'm not complaining I'm just curious." she flirts.

"I did it to bother the others when they came and found us for truth or dare.... Then you passed out and I still didn't have a shirt on." I bent down and kissed her on the cheek. "Oh and I kind of went ballistic on your dad and almost killed him" I explain running my fingers through my hair.

"What do you mean?"

"I cornered him and punched him a few hundred times."

she snorts, "he deserved that"

"I couldn't bear the thought of losing you" I say sincerely.

"I hope you know that I couldn't either Tobias."

"Ah so that's his real name!" A voice said behind us, I spin around to see.......