Fourtris Fanfiction

chapter 9

Chapter 9

Tobias POV

 

I sighed as Tris took my hand swinging it lightly. Everything was happy right now. After everything that had happened in the past couple of days were slipping from my mind as my thoughts were filled more and more of one thing: Tris.

"Tobias.." Her voice cut into my thoughts softly.

"Yes my love?"

"Will we be able to tell my mother?"

"Well yes I suppose we will have to tell her eventually."

"Could we tell her soon?" I thought for a moment a small plan forming in my head.

"Yes, pack a small bag we can catch the train either tonight or early tomorrow to tell her."

“But with training the initiates and all…. will that work?”

“Its going to have to work or else your mom will have to come here.”

“Why don’t we catch a train tomorrow morning so tonight we could have some time to ourselves..” She trailed off and i was actually surprised she said something like this. She was normally very timid and still afraid of intimacy. I guess she took my silence as unhappiness because she tried to quickly cover up what she said.

“You know, like sleeping and stuff because we’ve had a rough week.”

“hum… I was thinking we could do something a little more than sleeping… something like this.” I took her hand and spun her close to my chest and kissed her deeply. At that moment I didn’t care what others thought of us or that we were in a busy part of dauntless territory. I heard a few cat calls and a couple angry get a rooms, so I pulled back gently and heard Tris make a noise of annoyance.

"C'mon, let's go somewhere a little more private..." My mind was screaming "No be sensible!" And my heart was screaming let's do this!

Um so I am going to let you imagine the rest of how this scene goes because I am kinda bad at writing super heated scenes so let's just say things led to another and "stuff" happened. Now onto an early morning train ride.

 

NEXT MORNING!

We were on the train at around 5:00 in the morning. Tris was leaning sleepily against me and I held her close. We decided to set out to abnegation as soon as possible so we could have pretty much a whole day to spend with her mother.

“Tobias??” Her soft voice broke through my spaced out thoughts.

“Yes Tris?”

“I loooove you.”

“Tris?”

“hum..” She said this very quietly to the point where I could barely hear her. Her eyes were beginning to close slowly.

“I love you Tris.. now go to sleep.”

IN ABNEGATION

“Hi Mrs. Prior how are you?” I awkwardly held out my hand to shake  Tris’ mothers hand. I held Tris’ sleeping form in my arms and I was trying not to wake her.

“Whats wrong with Beatrice?" Her mother brushed off my handshake and rushed straight to her daughter.

“She's just exhausted, we’ve both had a rough week…. We have some news to tell you though that’s why we’re here.”

“Well then tell me! C’mon now spit it out boy!” Her mother seemed quite frail and small from far away… but once you meet her she can have quite the attitude. She stood before me, hands on her hips and frowning, a menacing glare on her face.

“I uh… I think this is something Tris and I should share with you together.” I looked down at my shoes, to afraid to meet her glare.

“If you got her pregnant, I swear boy, i will skin you alive.” I looked up terrified at her, and was trying to think of something clever to say but nothing would come out.

“Mom, we’re engaged.” Tris was now awake, and thank God for that or else I think i would have melted under her mother’s gaze.

“Oh Beatrice! Thats wonderful!!!” Her mother ripped her out of my arms and into a tight embraced.