Tris's adventure or love story?

Chapter 5: choosing day

Tris's POV 2 months later:
     "Tris it's time to wake up we have a big day today!" I hear a voice call to me through my bedroom door. Caleb. Caleb even though is only 10 months older than me acts like he is 10 years older than me. "I'm coming Caleb!" I yell through the door.
     At this point I get up to do my normal morning routine. Which mean get up, shower, brush my teeth and hair, and get dressed. Today is my final day in my abnegation gray robe. After I am dressed I walk to breakfast to see a silent Caleb starting at his plain oatmeal. I decide to let him think, if that's what he's doing and eat my oatmeal. Once this is finished we are off to the ceremony.
At the ceremony:
The abnegation are first to arrive as usual, apparently it's self indulgent to be late. In my mind I roll my eyes. Next to appear are the noses also known as Erudite. We call them noses because their noses are ALWAYS in a book. People call abnegation stiffs and it's because well, we don't do anything fun! After the noses are the candor, I haven't thought of a name for them.  Next are the pansycakes who are also known as amity. Then finally are the dauntless. They run in yelling at the top of their lungs. I want to be with them. Once they are all seated the ceremony starts.
I zone out because I don't know most of the people here then i hear it. "Caleb Prior" Marcus says after that Caleb walks up and take the knife. He looks nervous, a little too nervous. Caleb slits his hand and holds it over the water. "Erudite!" Marcus yells trying to hide his anger and failing a bit. I am happy and sad at the same time. I'm happy Caleb left but I'm sad he left me. "Beatrice Prior." That's when I hear it he calls my name and I walk up to the podium and take the knife from Marcus. As he is handing me the knife he whispers, " don't mess up or you'll regret it." Now I'm a bit scared, but not scared enough to to stay. I cut my hand and let my blood drip of the dauntless coals. I hear the sizzling of the coals and realize I did it. I got away from Marcus. "Dauntless!" Marcus yells barley even hiding his anger this time. I hear yells from the dauntless sector and realize these are now my people. "Uriah Pedrad" Uriah I almost forgot about Uriah. He walks to the podium and takes the knife, cuts his hand and the blood drips over the coals. "Dauntless" Marcus yells from the podium still a bit upset because of Caleb and I. When Uriah comes back instead of sitting in his usual seat he sits beside me. "Tris you stayed! I'm so proud of you!" Then he engulfs me in a hug and almost immediately I hug back.
Once the ceremony is over all of the dauntless start running. I am pretty fast so I can keep up and am pretty close to the front with Uriah at my heels. "Here climb up this I'll be right behind you." "Ok" I say to Uriah. Once everyone is on the platform I here it. The train. Once again everyone starts running and then once the train is close they jump onto it and since I have practice I can do it pretty easily, but others cannot. Once girl barley makes it onto the train and once she is in she falls into me. "Sorry I'm not very good at this. I'm Christina." Christina is tall with bronze skin like Uriah's and short black hair that reaches her shoulders. "I'm tris." I say to Christina. "Well look what we have here Tris made a friend." "First I though you were my friend. And second who says I didn't have friends in abnegation." I say back to Uriah's comment. Then Christina mouths, "He's cute!" And I mouth "I know!" Back to her and we both begin to giggle. "What's that all about Uriah asks." "Oh nothing." Christina says "You see this is what I mean by a friend I bet you wouldn't have told me whatever you just told her. And I'm Uriah by the way." "Nope I wouldn't have and this is Christina." Then Uriah and Christina shake hands. "Get ready to jump" someone yells and at that everyone stands near the edge of the train car and jump, "Together?" Ask Christina "yeah." I says and hold out my hand, Christina takes it and we jump out of the train.