Tris's adventure or love story?

Chapter 1: the beginning

Tris's POV
     I was riding the train back to my home in abnegation, where my step-father and most likely a belt await me. I was riding the train all day to my favorite faction, dauntless and the time got from me. The entire day I was walking around the pit just taking in the freedom of being dauntless. I also went to a secret place I found in the chasm, I'm pretty sure some one else has found it but no one had ever been there when I was there so, I'm hoping it's just my secret.
     As I prepare to jump into the Abnegation sector of the city, I also prepare myself to face my step-father, Marcus. I will never call Marcus my father because I real father would not beat their child, he would love them.
     And that's what my father did until the day he died. My father was shot and to this day still no one knows from who or why.
     As I reach my destination I jump off of the train with ease from all of the practice I have. I begin walking to my home and see something terrible. Marcus. "Beatrice Elizabeth Prior! What are you doing out this late at night you are half an hour past your curfew!" Marcus yells with rage in his voice. This is not my first time being late for my curfew even though I should have a curfew later than 9:30 since I'm 15 years old.
     I don't saw anything to Marcus after he says this, that will only get me in more trouble. I just follow Marcus to his gray Camaro. (In the picture above)
     As we arrive at home Marcus tells me to go   Straight to my room I do as I'm told right away to avoid getting into more trouble. I am sitting on my bed waiting for Marcus to come when my mom comes in. I love my mother and tell her everything she is the only person I still trust. Well I tell her everything except about Marcus. Marcus said if I ever got between him and my mother I would pay for it.
     My mother asks how my day was, she is so selfless I could never be like her. I am going to hate leaving her. My mother know I'm leaving, she knew since I was young that I belonged in dauntless instead of abnegation.
     After about 10 minutes my mother leaves to go to bed after telling me good night. And then after about 5 more minutes Marcus walks in and says the same thing he says every other time he beats me, "this is for your own good." His system is however many minutes your are late is how many slaps you get and since I was 30 minutes late, let's just say I'll be sore for a while. After Marcus is done he says the same thing he always say, " someday you'll learn to behave and be selfless."
     I check to see the damage and I have five huge bruises on my back. This is my live. Well at least as an abnegation...   

BOOM FIRST CHAPTER DOWN! I would like to give credit to the amazingly talented Veronica Roth for writing such a wonder series.