Tris's adventure or love story?

Chapter 3: the ride

Tris's POV    

     Once I'm out of abnegation I walk to the train tracks. Once the train arrives I run and jump onto it with ease. I decided that I am going to the fence and I am going to see the outside. At least that's what I though when all of a sudden...
     I hear crying, no scratch that, sobbing in a marsh. I debate with myself to check it out of not but my abnegation is too strong so I go see what's wrong. I guess I am more selfless than I thought.
     I jump off of the train into the marsh and keep following the crying which is getting louder and louder. I walk for a big until I see where the crying to coming from and I see a boy. This boy has bronze skin very short black hair and is wearing all black so I'm guessing he is dauntless.
     I start to walk closer and step on a twig then the boy says without looking up, " Go away Zeke I'm not in the mood for you right now. And how did you find me anyw-" he cuts himself off and looks up at me realizing I'm not however that zeke kid is. He stares at me his mouth hanging open.
     I the last few steps to the boy and say," close your mouth or you'll catch flys." I say closing his mouth. He looks down and blushed turning a bright red color. After about 2 minutes or so he looks up and says, " my name is Uriah, what's yours?" He asks me still a little red. "Tris" I say simply and that's when it's official I'm going by tris from now on.  "Well tris," Uriah says, "might I just say you look hot and I'm not a pansycake either." I giggle and say, "Weren't you just crying a minute ago?"  "Oh yeah you saw me crying didn't you." And all of a sudden his shoes become very interesting to him.
     "Uriah it's fine everyone cries." I say trying to comfort him. "Well I'd rather talk to you than cry anyway so I guess you won't get to see me crying." He says smirking. "Well I hate to ruin the mood but can I ask why you were crying?" I ask him hoping not to upset him. "Well..." He says his eyes starting to water, "Uriah it's fine if you don't want to tell me." I say to him
     "Actually I could use someone to talk to so here it goes." Uriah say then takes a deep breath, "Last night before my and my brother Zeke went to bed, we went to the hospital to check on my father who is in chemo therapy for his brain cancer. After we checked on him we heard one of the nurses talking to my mom saying he may not live for very much longer. At that point me and zeke were balling out eyes out and run back into the hospital room interrupting my mom and the nurse but we don't care. We run over and hug my dad and tell him we love him and went home." Uriah says as tears slide down his beautiful face.
Wait tris why did you think that you can't like him you just met him! Then Uriah starts talk again snapping my out of it, "When me my brother and my mom wake up we get a call from the doctor saying my father died. At this point he is starting to ball.
Uriah's POV
     Once I finish telling tris the story I start balling my eyes out and then I feel two small and soft arms wrap around me. Tris. I know I just met her but she is beautiful and very selfless to help me out of no where like that. I immediately hug back and I want to keep tris wrapped in my arms forever. Then one thing pops into my head I love her.